Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

Seasons Winsome

Spring tantalizingly unfolds vernal, winsome
Blossoms of lilies pristine, undulating to appease
Fawning nectar-dreams adrift on wings of bees
Frolicking tranquility of rustling flowering trees

Refulgent summer, too, unpacks variegated
Revelry on rivers, oceans, flamboyant meadows
As ubiquitously nature paints blooms primrose
On hills and valleys oscillating jubilant shadows

Autumn’s brilliance courts dazzling ebullience
Of mellowed sun scintillating eventide’s ruby glow
Where gamboge leaves of fall amber winds blow
As passions of romance vie moonlit stellar show

Snowfalls titillate, unveiling vehement winter
In eyes of lovers ruminating in blessings of yore
When enticing beats of hearts indulgently implore
Aesthetic glacial memories venerated evermore

July 31, 2021
Placed 1st: Alpha lines poetry contest
Sponsor: Joseph May
Placed 1st: A Brian Strand Rhyme Contest

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Valsa George November 21, 2021 at 6:11 AM Whichever poem of yours I choose to read, I find that it is placed first in one contest or the other! It is a badge of your greatness as a poet. Continue your victorious poetic odyssey, dear friend !

Kenisha Shines August 28, 2021 at 2:12 AM Congratulations ! beautiful poem.

Jennifer Fenn August 23, 2021 at 9:55 PM Wow Vijay! Two first places! Congratulations!

Susan Lawrence August 21, 2021 at 8:02 AM Vijay , So lovingly penned with adoration and appreciation and depth of emotion towards every season . I rode along the bubbling brook with you winding my way through each nuance and wished it would go on and on ! Thank you for this ride . Faving this ! Belated Congratulations on your win :) All the best , Susan

Tom Cunningham August 20, 2021 at 2:42 AM Im not surprised that this is top of the list Vijay. Congrats. Tom Vijay Pandit August 20, 2021 at 5:35 AM So very kind of you Tom. Much appreciate the sentiments. Many thanks.

Kim Merryman August 11, 2021 at 6:36 PM A wonderfully descriptive write, Vijay! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M Vijay Pandit August 19, 2021 at 6:10 AM Much appreciate your visit and comments, Kim. Many thanks.

Paula Goldsmith August 11, 2021 at 11:02 AM Congratulations on your win. "Seasons Winsome" is a creative write. I love spring and fall the best. Have a blessed day with your win............... Vijay Pandit August 19, 2021 at 6:10 AM Thank you Paula--much appreciate.

Joseph May August 9, 2021 at 7:11 PM Wonderful write on the seasons Vijay, Congrats on your win Vijay Pandit August 10, 2021 at 5:57 AM Thank you Joseph.

Eve Roper August 8, 2021 at 2:53 PM Back with congratulations on your win in Joseph's contest. Hugs Eve Vijay Pandit August 10, 2021 at 5:57 AM Thank you Eve.

Andrea Dietrich August 8, 2021 at 11:53 AM Congratulations. I knew you would be a winner!! Vijay Pandit August 10, 2021 at 5:57 AM Thank you Andrea.

Alexis Y. August 8, 2021 at 3:52 AM Hi Vijay, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved Have a great day:-) Alexis Vijay Pandit August 8, 2021 at 5:32 AM Thank you for your return visit, Alexis. Have a wonderful day.

Besma Riabi Dziri August 7, 2021 at 5:18 AM If I have to choose one of your seasons, or one of your stanzas or lines.. I rather will cherish them all! How can I resist the taste of sweet "nectar-dreams", the sight of what "nature paints" of summer flair, the "passions of romance" that defy "moonlit stella show", and the "venerated memories" in the "eyes of lovers"! What an amazing Nature portrait painted by a great poet! Definitely a fave! An immense pleasure to read your beauties, dear Vijay.. My deepest regards and blessings. Vijay Pandit August 8, 2021 at 5:31 AM Always a delight to read your feedback, Besma. Much appreciate your your detailed comments. Many many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Joanna Daniel August 5, 2021 at 3:49 AM This is beautiful, Vijay, you have described the seasons so well:) Vijay Pandit August 5, 2021 at 6:37 AM Thank you Jo--much appreciate.

Sara Kendrick August 4, 2021 at 1:24 PM Creative and descriptive contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for dropping by my blog about Carolyn's death. Sara Vijay Pandit August 4, 2021 at 3:40 PM Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, Sara. Many thanks.

Mike Gentile August 4, 2021 at 10:33 AM I love seasonal writes Vijay and yours is awesome! Packed with vivid imagery. each stanza stands alone . A great entry for the contest, good luck!! Vijay Pandit August 4, 2021 at 3:40 PM Much appreciate, Mike. Many thanks.

Eve Roper August 3, 2021 at 8:31 PM Your work outstand, Vijay, don't have to say good luck. It already has it. Vijay Pandit August 4, 2021 at 3:39 PM Thank you Eve--much appreciate your visit and comments.

M. L. Kiser August 3, 2021 at 11:44 AM I love the imagery here; very nicely crafted with feeling. Vijay Pandit August 3, 2021 at 3:33 PM Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks, MLK.

Supraja Kannan August 2, 2021 at 8:46 PM Absolutely gorgeous!!! Beautiful imagery... A winner for sure... Vijay Pandit August 3, 2021 at 6:13 AM Thank you Supraja--much appreciate.

Angela Crabtree August 2, 2021 at 8:33 PM A beautiful poem for the seasons Vijay. Saved this one to read again. Hope you have a wonderful week. :) Vijay Pandit August 3, 2021 at 6:13 AM So glad to see you again, Anglea. Much appreciate your feedback and a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Andrea Dietrich August 2, 2021 at 2:18 PM zowzers!!! I think I see the number one winner before me!!! we shall see! Vijay Pandit August 3, 2021 at 6:12 AM So very kind of you Andrea. Much appreciate. Many thanks.

Tom Cunningham August 2, 2021 at 12:28 PM A beautiful journey through the seasons Vijay, Best of luck Tom Vijay Pandit August 3, 2021 at 6:12 AM Much appreciate Tom, as always. Many thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos August 2, 2021 at 7:13 AM Vijay, what can I say I love it and wish you all the best in the contest, not that you need it! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Vijay Pandit August 3, 2021 at 6:11 AM Much appreciate Jennifer, your visit and kind remarks. Many thanks.

Michelle Faulkner August 1, 2021 at 2:10 PM You have an impressive vocabulary, I love words like 'vernal' 'refulgent' and 'ebullience' - looks like a top winner to me! Vijay Pandit August 2, 2021 at 5:09 AM Much appreciate Michelle, your visit and kind remarks. Many thanks.

Delice Arleen Skelly August 1, 2021 at 1:35 AM This is very good Vijay. I really like your Alpha Lines... This will surely do very well in the contest...Delice Vijay Pandit August 1, 2021 at 5:24 AM So very kind of you. Much appreciate, Delice--many thanks.

Victor Buhagiar July 31, 2021 at 10:39 PM All seasons have their exquisite moments. Deftly done with perfect words in alphabetic order. Best for a win. Vijay Pandit August 1, 2021 at 5:24 AM Much appreciate Victor, as always. Many many thanks.

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