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Seasons Winsome

Spring tantalizingly unfolds vernal, winsome Blossoms of lilies pristine, undulating to appease Fawning nectar-dreams adrift on wings of bees Frolicking tranquility of rustling flowering trees Refulgent summer, too, unpacks variegated Revelry on rivers, oceans, flamboyant meadows As ubiquitously nature paints blooms primrose On hills and valleys oscillating jubilant shadows Autumn’s brilliance courts dazzling ebullience Of mellowed sun scintillating eventide’s ruby glow Where gamboge leaves of fall amber winds blow As passions of romance vie moonlit stellar show Snowfalls titillate, unveiling vehement winter In eyes of lovers ruminating in blessings of yore When enticing beats of hearts indulgently implore Aesthetic glacial memories venerated evermore July 31, 2021 Placed 1st: Alpha lines poetry contest Sponsor: Joseph May Placed 1st: A Brian Strand Rhyme Contest

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Valsa George

Date: 11/21/2021 6:11:00 AM

Whichever poem of yours I choose to read, I find that it is placed first in one contest or the other! It is a badge of your greatness as a poet. Continue your victorious poetic odyssey, dear friend !

Kenisha Shines

Date: 8/28/2021 2:12:00 AM

Congratulations ! beautiful poem.

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 8/23/2021 9:55:00 PM

Wow Vijay! Two first places! Congratulations!

Susan Lawrence

Date: 8/21/2021 8:02:00 AM

Vijay , So lovingly penned with adoration and appreciation and depth of emotion towards every season . I rode along the bubbling brook with you winding my way through each nuance and wished it would go on and on ! Thank you for this ride . Faving this ! Belated Congratulations on your win :) All the best , Susan

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/20/2021 2:42:00 AM

Im not surprised that this is top of the list Vijay. Congrats. Tom

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/20/2021 5:35:00 AM

So very kind of you Tom. Much appreciate the sentiments. Many thanks.

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/11/2021 6:36:00 PM

A wonderfully descriptive write, Vijay! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/19/2021 6:10:00 AM

Much appreciate your visit and comments, Kim. Many thanks.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/11/2021 11:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. "Seasons Winsome" is a creative write. I love spring and fall the best. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/19/2021 6:10:00 AM

Thank you Paula--much appreciate.

Joseph May

Date: 8/9/2021 7:11:00 PM

Wonderful write on the seasons Vijay, Congrats on your win

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2021 5:57:00 AM

Thank you Joseph.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/8/2021 2:53:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your win in Joseph's contest. Hugs Eve

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2021 5:57:00 AM

Thank you Eve.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2021 11:53:00 AM

Congratulations. I knew you would be a winner!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2021 5:57:00 AM

Thank you Andrea.

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/8/2021 3:52:00 AM

Hi Vijay, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved Have a great day:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/8/2021 5:32:00 AM

Thank you for your return visit, Alexis. Have a wonderful day.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 8/7/2021 5:18:00 AM

If I have to choose one of your seasons, or one of your stanzas or lines.. I rather will cherish them all! How can I resist the taste of sweet "nectar-dreams", the sight of what "nature paints" of summer flair, the "passions of romance" that defy "moonlit stella show", and the "venerated memories" in the "eyes of lovers"! What an amazing Nature portrait painted by a great poet! Definitely a fave! An immense pleasure to read your beauties, dear Vijay.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/8/2021 5:31:00 AM

Always a delight to read your feedback, Besma. Much appreciate your your detailed comments. Many many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/5/2021 3:49:00 AM

This is beautiful, Vijay, you have described the seasons so well:)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/5/2021 6:37:00 AM

Thank you Jo--much appreciate.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/4/2021 1:24:00 PM

Creative and descriptive contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for dropping by my blog about Carolyn's death. Sara

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/4/2021 3:40:00 PM

Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, Sara. Many thanks.

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/4/2021 10:33:00 AM

I love seasonal writes Vijay and yours is awesome! Packed with vivid imagery. each stanza stands alone . A great entry for the contest, good luck!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/4/2021 3:40:00 PM

Much appreciate, Mike. Many thanks.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/3/2021 8:31:00 PM

Your work outstand, Vijay, don't have to say good luck. It already has it.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/4/2021 3:39:00 PM

Thank you Eve--much appreciate your visit and comments.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/3/2021 11:44:00 AM

I love the imagery here; very nicely crafted with feeling.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/3/2021 3:33:00 PM

Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks, MLK.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 8/2/2021 8:46:00 PM

Absolutely gorgeous!!! Beautiful imagery... A winner for sure...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/3/2021 6:13:00 AM

Thank you Supraja--much appreciate.

Angela Crabtree

Date: 8/2/2021 8:33:00 PM

A beautiful poem for the seasons Vijay. Saved this one to read again. Hope you have a wonderful week. :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/3/2021 6:13:00 AM

So glad to see you again, Anglea. Much appreciate your feedback and a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/2/2021 2:18:00 PM

zowzers!!! I think I see the number one winner before me!!! we shall see!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/3/2021 6:12:00 AM

So very kind of you Andrea. Much appreciate. Many thanks.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/2/2021 12:28:00 PM

A beautiful journey through the seasons Vijay, Best of luck Tom

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/3/2021 6:12:00 AM

Much appreciate Tom, as always. Many thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/2/2021 7:13:00 AM

Vijay, what can I say I love it and wish you all the best in the contest, not that you need it! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/3/2021 6:11:00 AM

Much appreciate Jennifer, your visit and kind remarks. Many thanks.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/1/2021 2:10:00 PM

You have an impressive vocabulary, I love words like 'vernal' 'refulgent' and 'ebullience' - looks like a top winner to me!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/2/2021 5:09:00 AM

Much appreciate Michelle, your visit and kind remarks. Many thanks.

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 8/1/2021 1:35:00 AM

This is very good Vijay. I really like your Alpha Lines... This will surely do very well in the contest...Delice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/1/2021 5:24:00 AM

So very kind of you. Much appreciate, Delice--many thanks.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/31/2021 10:39:00 PM

All seasons have their exquisite moments. Deftly done with perfect words in alphabetic order. Best for a win.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/1/2021 5:24:00 AM

Much appreciate Victor, as always. Many many thanks.