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Seasons Change Lune

Autumn speaks to me
Golden tones
Leaves are whispering 

Blue skies arc
Bare branches appear
Winter’s bones

autumnwinterhaiku

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Kim Rodrigues

December 29, 2021 at 7:20 AM

Two seasons!

Connie Marcum Wong

December 21, 2021 at 9:43 AM

These haiku are gorgeous SuZ. I am Faving them! You are such a talented Poet. I miss having you here in Hawaii. Blessings and Mele Kalikimaka my friend. xxoo

Michelle Faulkner

November 3, 2021 at 5:59 PM

You display the golden and blue of autumn so well here! Lovely~

Richard Lamoureux

October 26, 2021 at 12:57 PM

So much imagery with so few words. Bravo. ;0)

Suzette Richards

October 24, 2021 at 11:13 PM

You nailed it: with the bare branches comes the bonus of being able to appreciate the blue sky (winter is our dry season here).

Suzanne Delaney

October 25, 2021 at 8:20 AM

So true Suzette: I live in a wooded area and never see other houses until Winter when all the leaves are gone. Thanks for visiting. SuZ

Jan Allison

October 24, 2021 at 11:11 AM

I love the transition from autumn to winter, beautifully penned Suz:-) hugs Jan xx

Suzanne Delaney

October 25, 2021 at 8:08 AM

Hi Jan: I love each season for it’s certain qualities but Autumn touches me most of all. Best, SuZ

Tom Cunningham

October 24, 2021 at 10:59 AM

My favourite season Suz, you captured it well in your haiku. Tom

Suzanne Delaney

October 25, 2021 at 8:07 AM

Hi Tom…always good to see you and hear your encouraging words. SuZ

Sam Kauffman

October 24, 2021 at 9:45 AM

Hi SuZ! This is so visual. Love your creative and unique images. I can feel autumn though your lune! Blessings.

Suzanne Delaney

October 25, 2021 at 8:06 AM

Hi Sam: So nice to have your encouraging words. Best, SuZ

Paulette Calasibetta

October 24, 2021 at 9:38 AM

Dear Suzanne, I too love autumn and your skillful Haiku speaks to me..... Lovely! You may want to check out my page~I have several poems on Autumn. Blessings, Paulette

Suzanne Delaney

October 25, 2021 at 8:05 AM

Thanks for your visit Paulette….sister lover of Autumn. SuZ

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