Seasons Battle

Summer and winter 
Do battle for time and space
Trees and flowers struggle
As the seasons ram each other
Finally one surrenders
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 9:36 AM
Stopping by today just to thank you for your kind comments. Have a wonderful weekend and keep your pen flowing. Always a pleasure to read your poetry Jimmy. Love,Carol
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November 6, 2010 at 8:57 AM
What a unique and creative perspective on the change of seasons, Jimmy. You use personification so well in your fall tanka. If this is an entry for the tanka contest, you know I'm pulling for you to succeed! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 5:59 AM
It is like just the cycle of our life - surrender is the safest game I think, Jimmy
Haick Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 10:46 PM
Hey Jam, I'm happy that you were able to submit this before Amy's contest closes! Wishing you good luck with this.Excellent, well-written Tanka. Love, Audrey
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November 5, 2010 at 9:57 PM
Outstanding tanka Jimmy!
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