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Seasons Battle

Summer and winter Do battle for time and space Trees and flowers struggle As the seasons ram each other Finally one surrenders

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/6/2010 9:36:00 AM

Stopping by today just to thank you for your kind comments. Have a wonderful weekend and keep your pen flowing. Always a pleasure to read your poetry Jimmy. Love,Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/6/2010 8:57:00 AM

What a unique and creative perspective on the change of seasons, Jimmy. You use personification so well in your fall tanka. If this is an entry for the tanka contest, you know I'm pulling for you to succeed! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/6/2010 5:59:00 AM

It is like just the cycle of our life - surrender is the safest game I think, Jimmy

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/5/2010 10:46:00 PM

Hey Jam, I'm happy that you were able to submit this before Amy's contest closes! Wishing you good luck with this.Excellent, well-written Tanka. Love, Audrey

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 11/5/2010 9:57:00 PM

Outstanding tanka Jimmy!