Seasons

It was a sad day in May When you went away Sadder in June When you came home too soon. To find April In the shower.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/14/2024 9:54:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Seasons" write. I love spring time. I wish you would write more. Have a very blessed day/week writing away..........

Paul Bell
Date: 4/15/2024 11:48:00 AM

Sooner or later that big yellow thing is going to shine.

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 4/9/2024 9:18:00 PM

Lovely write enjoyed this cute poem

Paul Bell
Date: 4/10/2024 9:24:00 AM

Glad you liked it.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 4/6/2024 4:31:00 AM

witty, bet the fly on the bathroom wall had fun lol

Paul Bell
Date: 4/7/2024 2:05:00 AM

The fly was the chief witness for the prosecution. lol. Get something witty up, I need a laugh.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/4/2024 6:46:00 PM

Very clever, indeed. Finding ' April in the shower. ' While this is seasonal, it's also sensual and sassy. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Hugs, Brandy

Paul Bell
Date: 4/5/2024 2:23:00 AM

The divorce lawyer thought it was sassy too. lol

David Kavanagh

Date: 4/4/2024 12:40:00 PM

Nice one Paul! Very clever, I’m sure April was well worth it lol! Cheers David

Paul Bell
Date: 4/5/2024 2:23:00 AM

She scrubbed up well. lol

Ink Empress

Date: 4/4/2024 12:04:00 PM

Creative use of months to depict time..: and emotions around them. In a seasonal manner. The opening line depicts loss and the last line grief. I think, i got it right? This has an evocative touch dear paul. Felt this poem. Pleasure always reading you

Paul Bell
Date: 4/5/2024 2:47:00 AM

Looking for a month of sun now.