Seasons

It was a sad day in May
When you went away
Sadder in June
When you came home too soon.
To find April
In the shower.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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George Avatar
September 26, 2025 at 4:49 AM
This is so concise and lovely !
Radice Avatar
July 28, 2024 at 2:00 PM
Great work Paul. If JULY to her she MAY not believe you…..start the car. :) Cheers - Gary
Bell Avatar
July 29, 2024 at 2:39 AM
Just a little July.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 9:54 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Seasons" write. I love spring time. I wish you would write more. Have a very blessed day/week writing away..........
Bell Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 11:48 AM
Sooner or later that big yellow thing is going to shine.
Nicholsen Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 9:18 PM
Lovely write enjoyed this cute poem
Bell Avatar
April 10, 2024 at 9:24 AM
Glad you liked it.
Puddifoot Avatar
April 6, 2024 at 4:31 AM
witty, bet the fly on the bathroom wall had fun lol
Bell Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 2:05 AM
The fly was the chief witness for the prosecution. lol. Get something witty up, I need a laugh.
Nicole Avatar
April 4, 2024 at 6:46 PM
Very clever, indeed. Finding ' April in the shower. ' While this is seasonal, it's also sensual and sassy. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Hugs, Brandy
Bell Avatar
April 5, 2024 at 2:23 AM
The divorce lawyer thought it was sassy too. lol
Kavanagh  Avatar
April 4, 2024 at 12:40 PM
Nice one Paul! Very clever, I’m sure April was well worth it lol! Cheers David
Bell Avatar
April 5, 2024 at 2:23 AM
She scrubbed up well. lol
Empress Avatar
April 4, 2024 at 12:04 PM
Creative use of months to depict time..: and emotions around them. In a seasonal manner. The opening line depicts loss and the last line grief. I think, i got it right? This has an evocative touch dear paul. Felt this poem. Pleasure always reading you
Bell Avatar
April 5, 2024 at 2:47 AM
Looking for a month of sun now.
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