Seasons

It was a sad day in May
When you went away
Sadder in June
When you came home too soon.
To find April
In the shower.

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Date: 7/28/2024 2:00:00 PM
Great work Paul. If JULY to her she MAY not believe you…..start the car. :) Cheers - Gary
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Paul Bell
Date: 7/29/2024 2:39:00 AM
Just a little July.
Date: 4/14/2024 9:54:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Seasons" write. I love spring time. I wish you would write more. Have a very blessed day/week writing away..........
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Paul Bell
Date: 4/15/2024 11:48:00 AM
Sooner or later that big yellow thing is going to shine.
Date: 4/9/2024 9:18:00 PM
Lovely write enjoyed this cute poem
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Paul Bell
Date: 4/10/2024 9:24:00 AM
Glad you liked it.
Date: 4/6/2024 4:31:00 AM
witty, bet the fly on the bathroom wall had fun lol
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Paul Bell
Date: 4/7/2024 2:05:00 AM
The fly was the chief witness for the prosecution. lol. Get something witty up, I need a laugh.
Date: 4/4/2024 6:46:00 PM
Very clever, indeed. Finding ' April in the shower. ' While this is seasonal, it's also sensual and sassy. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Paul Bell
Date: 4/5/2024 2:23:00 AM
The divorce lawyer thought it was sassy too. lol
Date: 4/4/2024 12:40:00 PM
Nice one Paul! Very clever, I’m sure April was well worth it lol! Cheers David
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Date: 4/5/2024 2:23:00 AM
She scrubbed up well. lol
Date: 4/4/2024 12:04:00 PM
Creative use of months to depict time..: and emotions around them. In a seasonal manner. The opening line depicts loss and the last line grief. I think, i got it right? This has an evocative touch dear paul. Felt this poem. Pleasure always reading you
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Paul Bell
Date: 4/5/2024 2:47:00 AM
Looking for a month of sun now.
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