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Seasonal Senryu

Three Humorous Senryu If winter landscape Had snow that was black as coal It would still be cold If sunlight was green Shining on crimson nature It would still be hot. If rain was yellow Running like horse piss in streets It would still be wet.

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Date: 3/28/2012 4:33:00 PM
enjoyed them all! thanks for the smile...
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 3/28/2012 5:12:00 PM
thank you iLene
Date: 3/28/2012 3:13:00 AM
Funny, my mind was not at all on horse piss, until now ... Alan Douglas
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 3/28/2012 3:51:00 AM
thank you alan

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