Jan Oskar Hansen Poet Haiku

Seasonal Senryu

Three Humorous Senryu 

If winter landscape 
Had snow that was black as coal 
It would still be cold 

If sunlight was green 
Shining on crimson nature 
It would still be hot. 

If rain was yellow 
Running like horse piss in streets 
It would still be wet.

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Ilene Bauer March 28, 2012 at 4:33 PM enjoyed them all! thanks for the smile... Jan Oskar Hansen March 28, 2012 at 5:12 PM thank you iLene

Alan Douglas March 28, 2012 at 3:13 AM Funny, my mind was not at all on horse piss, until now ... Alan Douglas Jan Oskar Hansen March 28, 2012 at 3:51 AM thank you alan