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Seasonal Light

the autumn sky
the colours red and orange
pages of light

natureautumnhaiku

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Nick Bagnall

Date: 2/19/2010 4:39:00 AM

Ah if only Autumn were really that nice - nice poem

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/1/2010 4:42:00 PM

quite beautiful. Nice moving vision employed with the pages. -Robert

Mac Mcgovern

Date: 2/1/2010 4:11:00 PM

Your Haiku's are some of the best I have read. This one is absolutely perfect and a visual masterpiece. Mac

Mac Mcgovern

Date: 2/1/2010 4:10:00 PM

Your Haiku's are some of the best I have read. This one is absolutely perfect and a visual masterpiece. Mac

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/1/2010 1:38:00 PM

Neat Haiku that is alive with color. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Florentina Laic

Date: 1/28/2010 9:33:00 AM

Light and colors..., interesting suggestion. I liked it. I have the pleasure to announce you that my book `Alike and Asparagus` (fiction) is published and you can find it in some bookshops from UK or USA and on www.authorhouse.com, www.amazon.co.uk and so on. I hope you will like it. With love, Florentina

Elaine George

Date: 1/25/2010 6:58:00 AM

Very beautiful, dear Brandee. Thank you for sharing. Love, Lainie

Margaret Foster

Date: 1/25/2010 1:17:00 AM

As the seasons change the pages turn. well done. thank you for your kind comments...Margaret

Sean Kelly

Date: 1/21/2010 3:07:00 AM

Mother Nature can create some colourful displays , at times . It takes the poet's pen to capture them in words ; So well done and thanks for your kind comments ....

Lena Townsend

Date: 1/20/2010 6:43:00 PM

This is a beautiful Haiku. I can see the images clearly in my mind. Well done. Smiles from Lolita~ thank you so much for your kind and comforting words on my blog.

Date: 1/20/2010 6:04:00 PM

What a beautiful view. Nice use of imagery. Thank you for sharing your creativity with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/20/2010 4:26:00 PM

Visual and beautiful Brandee.. hope u entered it in Brian's Poetry of the Noun contest.. this is a wonderful write... thankxxx for your congrats on my winning poem too.... the contests are certainly a fun spot on the Soup... luv.. Linda-Marie.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/19/2010 11:03:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderfully written poetry today Brandee. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 1/19/2010 9:07:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest Brandee.Rgds Brian

Sue Mason

Date: 1/18/2010 2:48:00 PM

Great imagery here, Brandee !! There is a tinge to the sky's blue that only seems to happen in September and you've brought that image back for me ... smile ...