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Short Form Poetry x3 Contest   ~   December 23, 2023

Sponsored by Chetta Achara

Forms used: Haiku, Diamonte, and Limerick buds bloom then wither before fall welcomes winter ~ seasonal changes spring lush and green flowers bud then bloom summer heat cools in autumn leaves tumble aground long before winter's snow earth always seems to be reborn in spring summer is the time when cicada sing autumn leaves, burnished gold northerly winds blow cold snowflakes are crystal gifts winter will bring

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Date: 12/23/2023 4:46:00 PM
I loved how these three forms flowed together each with their own beautiful imagery...how creative and picturesque this poem was. Wishing you a happy holiday. Hugs, Sara
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/23/2023 10:58:00 PM
I enjoyed the challenge of a different kind of contest. Thanks for the well wishes, Sara.
Date: 12/23/2023 3:02:00 PM
Very nice seasonal poem! Have a great time lovely Lin with best warmest wishes.
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Date: 12/23/2023 3:31:00 PM
Thank you very much for the sweet compliments, ~AA.
Date: 12/23/2023 9:52:00 AM
Lovely imagery on this fine contest entry, my friend. Good luck in the contest, Lin! Have a pleasant weekend! Bill
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Date: 12/23/2023 3:30:00 PM
Thanks, Bill. i’m happy knowing you liked it. Weekend is great so far. Hoping yours is too.
Date: 12/23/2023 7:07:00 AM
You captured seasonal change well in three different forms Lin. I do love seasonal change and the joy they bring. Best of luck in the contest. Have a lovely weekend. Tom
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Date: 12/23/2023 7:14:00 AM
Thanks, Tom. Living where we do, I'm sure you see more of the changes than I get to enjoy. I hope your holiday weekend will be special. Pain free and with loved ones, for you. Most of mine will be out of town.

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