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Season of Tears

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Author's Note: With the Rictameter I found differing sites gave differing information regarding the first line as far as it having to be one word, but all agreed it was two syllables.

She weeps as the winds whip. The weary woman waits, wishing winter's wrath would weaken, wondering when winsome weather might wake. Then warm rains wipe her wintry wounds as wisps of life weave tint. Welcoming Spring, she weeps. 01/16/2023

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Barbara Barry-Nishanian

Date: 1/31/2023 2:54:00 PM

Congrats again!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/28/2023 3:11:00 PM

Wistful and lovely. Congrats

Fj Thomas
Date: 1/29/2023 4:11:00 PM

Thank you Andie :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/28/2023 7:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/story. Spring is coming. Have a blessed day/weekend................

Fj Thomas
Date: 1/29/2023 4:10:00 PM

Thank you again for your kind visits Paula.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/28/2023 6:41:00 AM

Beautiful FJ. Great alliteration! Congratulations on your win! :)

Fj Thomas
Date: 1/29/2023 4:10:00 PM

Good evening Linda, thank you very much madam.

Hilo Poet

Date: 1/27/2023 9:47:00 PM

Your rictameter, FJ, was intricately breathless and enjoyable. My compliments on your 1st Place win, Aloha William

Fj Thomas
Date: 1/29/2023 4:09:00 PM

Mahalo William, for your very gracious compliment.

Arlo Parker

Date: 1/19/2023 9:03:00 PM

Alliterative gem, FJ. Thanks 4 posting, ~;o]

Fj Thomas
Date: 1/20/2023 10:25:00 AM

Thanks so much Arlo!

Juliet Ligon

Date: 1/19/2023 10:16:00 AM

I like how "she weeps" has different meanings in the beginning and at the end, weeping with weariness vs. weeping with joy. Great job on weaving all the w's together into something that makes sense.

Fj Thomas
Date: 1/20/2023 10:27:00 AM

Thank you Juliet. I'm glad you recognized the difference in emotion there. I have been trying to get things together for a short trip but I am hoping to be back on this afternoon :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/18/2023 10:32:00 PM

Wow! Simply wow! Flo, you have weaved magic, sure to win:)

Fj Thomas
Date: 1/20/2023 10:24:00 AM

Hey Jo! Thank you my friend. I have really been trying to exercise this brain.

Deb M

Date: 1/17/2023 10:23:00 PM

Beautiful FJ! Debx

Fj Thomas
Date: 1/18/2023 9:36:00 AM

Thanks Deb ;)

Jenna Logan

Date: 1/17/2023 4:42:00 PM

You’ve created a wonderful Rictameter embellished with alliteration. So nicely written, Flo.

Jenna Logan
Date: 1/18/2023 9:39:00 AM

No exhaustion, but trying to catch up on so many things could take me there. Thanks.

Fj Thomas
Date: 1/18/2023 9:35:00 AM

Hey Lady :) Nice to see you're feeling better. Hopefully no hanging exhaustion or weakness. Thank you