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Seaside Love

On our skin gleams pearl white sand in the sheen of setting sun. From sea deep as our love - come waves caressing land. For Brian Strand's A POEM YOU LIKE any form/theme MAX 7 lines Poetry Contest

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Date: 1/17/2011 10:29:00 PM
Love this Andrea, as usual i'm 3 days behind everyone else, in rating. Harry
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Date: 1/17/2011 4:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 1/17/2011 3:36:00 PM
It's a BIG winner to me too! Lovely. Light & Love
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Date: 1/17/2011 2:21:00 PM
Good Luck Andrea~ in the contest.. what a mixture of love~Skat
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Date: 1/17/2011 10:41:00 AM
lovely imagery, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 1/17/2011 10:35:00 AM
Andrea, This is so beautiful, I see it all. Congratulations on your win hon. Lov, Shar
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Date: 1/17/2011 8:44:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations my friend. This is beautiful, seaside is my favourite place:)))) I love waves caressing land. It seems like that at the sea, beautiful
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Date: 1/17/2011 8:30:00 AM
Congratulations for your win in the "Love or Humor" contest Andrea sponsored by John Freeman. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/17/2011 4:38:00 AM
Hello Andrea. Thanks for the kind comment and congratulations on your success with this fine write. Love the flow of this, especially, 'waves caressing land'. Eamon
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Date: 1/16/2011 8:24:00 PM
Nice to see you here Andrea. The honors keep coming. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/16/2011 8:15:00 PM
Knew this one was awinner. Many congratulations Andrea.
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Date: 1/16/2011 6:48:00 PM
Exquisite write, Andrea! Warm congratulations on your fantastic win in John's contest! Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/16/2011 5:36:00 PM
gotta love this flowing write, andrea...HEADS UP for the big win in the contest!! :) nette
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Date: 1/16/2011 5:35:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your fantastic win in John's contest with this fabulous dodoitsu my friend.. another top tenner and rightly so luv..
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Date: 1/16/2011 3:06:00 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/16/2011 2:59:00 PM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Andrea
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Date: 1/16/2011 2:42:00 PM
Sizzling sirloin Andrea! congratulations on your 2nt place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/15/2011 12:15:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for you consistent support of my contest, it doesn't go unnoticed. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/15/2011 5:11:00 AM
Great entry and made me smile.... best of luck my dear...luv Michael
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Date: 1/15/2011 3:20:00 AM
I definitely love your take on the contest Andrea :)-- combining sea and love, ah what could be better indeed? Enjoyed the metaphors you used here too-- this is just so romantic :) haha mine turned out to be a bit trying hard-- I overdid it, pushing myself to write poems all in one go for these contests-- lol!!! this keeping out of the Soup is majorly backfiring on me!! I know this is a winner, has to be :) -- hugs nikko :)
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Date: 1/14/2011 10:20:00 PM
A sea side love, Andrea Dietrich. Sweet on the, Dodoitsu. I think your form is right, since you said mine reads like a haiku. I don't know what you meant by it? I wish you the best of luck in John freeman's contest (lin~ra)
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Date: 1/14/2011 1:06:00 PM
Great Andrea I must have been messed up on the med.s I'm on but thanks for the heads-up on it.Went and fixed it.~Luv~Teresa
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Date: 1/14/2011 9:24:00 AM
A write full of awesome imagery. Good luck on the contest. Love Phyl
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Date: 1/14/2011 6:13:00 AM
Great imagery, Andrea! Your lines remind me of my time spent in Vanuatu and the lovely coastline there! Best of luck for John's contest!...And thank you for your ongoing friendly comments!....Love, Gert
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Date: 1/14/2011 4:18:00 AM
A gorgeous image Andrea... Good luck for John's contest.. love, Wilma
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