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Seaside Love

On our skin gleams pearl white sand
in the sheen of setting sun.
From sea deep as our love - come
waves caressing land.

For Brian Strand's
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Harry Horsman

January 17, 2011 at 10:29 PM

Love this Andrea, as usual i'm 3 days behind everyone else, in rating. Harry

Sara Kendrick

January 17, 2011 at 4:34 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

January 17, 2011 at 3:36 PM

It's a BIG winner to me too! Lovely. Light & Love

Skat A

January 17, 2011 at 2:21 PM

Good Luck Andrea~ in the contest.. what a mixture of love~Skat

Francine Roberts

January 17, 2011 at 10:41 AM

lovely imagery, congrats on your win in the contest

Sharon Ruebel

January 17, 2011 at 10:35 AM

Andrea, This is so beautiful, I see it all. Congratulations on your win hon. Lov, Shar

Eiken Laan

January 17, 2011 at 8:44 AM

Andrea, congratulations my friend. This is beautiful, seaside is my favourite place:)))) I love waves caressing land. It seems like that at the sea, beautiful

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 17, 2011 at 8:30 AM

Congratulations for your win in the "Love or Humor" contest Andrea sponsored by John Freeman. Love, Carol

Eamon Duffin

January 17, 2011 at 4:38 AM

Hello Andrea. Thanks for the kind comment and congratulations on your success with this fine write. Love the flow of this, especially, 'waves caressing land'. Eamon

Joyce Johnson

January 16, 2011 at 8:24 PM

Nice to see you here Andrea. The honors keep coming. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Tahera Mannan

January 16, 2011 at 8:15 PM

Knew this one was awinner. Many congratulations Andrea.

Audrey Haick

January 16, 2011 at 6:48 PM

Exquisite write, Andrea! Warm congratulations on your fantastic win in John's contest! Love, Annalise

Nette Onclaud

January 16, 2011 at 5:36 PM

gotta love this flowing write, andrea...HEADS UP for the big win in the contest!! :) nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 16, 2011 at 5:35 PM

Congrats Andrea on your fantastic win in John's contest with this fabulous dodoitsu my friend.. another top tenner and rightly so luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

January 16, 2011 at 3:06 PM

Andrea, Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 16, 2011 at 2:59 PM

Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Andrea

John Freeman

January 16, 2011 at 2:42 PM

Sizzling sirloin Andrea! congratulations on your 2nt place. Agape, Moses

John Freeman

January 15, 2011 at 12:15 PM

Andrea, thanks for you consistent support of my contest, it doesn't go unnoticed. Agape, Moses

Michael J. Falotico

January 15, 2011 at 5:11 AM

Great entry and made me smile.... best of luck my dear...luv Michael

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

January 15, 2011 at 3:20 AM

I definitely love your take on the contest Andrea :)-- combining sea and love, ah what could be better indeed? Enjoyed the metaphors you used here too-- this is just so romantic :) haha mine turned out to be a bit trying hard-- I overdid it, pushing myself to write poems all in one go for these contests-- lol!!! this keeping out of the Soup is majorly backfiring on me!! I know this is a winner, has to be :) -- hugs nikko :)

Hathor Ammutlinra

January 14, 2011 at 10:20 PM

A sea side love, Andrea Dietrich. Sweet on the, Dodoitsu. I think your form is right, since you said mine reads like a haiku. I don't know what you meant by it? I wish you the best of luck in John freeman's contest (lin~ra)

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

January 14, 2011 at 1:06 PM

Great Andrea I must have been messed up on the med.s I'm on but thanks for the heads-up on it.Went and fixed it.~Luv~Teresa

Phyllis Babcock

January 14, 2011 at 9:24 AM

A write full of awesome imagery. Good luck on the contest. Love Phyl

Gert W. Knop

January 14, 2011 at 6:13 AM

Great imagery, Andrea! Your lines remind me of my time spent in Vanuatu and the lovely coastline there! Best of luck for John's contest!...And thank you for your ongoing friendly comments!....Love, Gert