Seashells' Trance

It was almost like a summer ritual To prance along the brightened shores of grain, When balmy trees wafted as usual Aunt Em’s hut glazed nearby lakeside's terrain. Waxed seashells rose like buffed pods on the ground, Dotted and curved, echoing of hummed waves played As we gathered them on coast walks, spellbound The array of tinseled humps were engraved And strung together into bright marble charms. While Aunt and I giggled, skirts fluttered on air Knitting loops as bracelets on tanned forearms, An enchantment draped by August’s fanfare. …I revel now at the trance of seashells’ gifts my childhood heart nestling magic that uplifts! Story Poem Contest, Carol Eastman Written by: nette onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Deschler Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 12:48 PM
When I was a kid, I loved to walk along the lakeshore and collect seashells, too. This poem brought back to me those warm memories of summertime.... I really enjoyed this wonderful write, Nette! Congratulations on your win!
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June 25, 2014 at 4:34 PM
Hi Nette, I enjoyed this magical, well-written story! Congratulations on your great win. BRAVO!
Smith Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 2:31 PM
Congrats, Nette on a great win with such beautiful childhood memories.. Hugs.. Arlene
Fraser Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 1:55 PM
Beautiful Summery images abound 'Princess Nette' with family old and new enjoying nature as it should be, safe and free. You are indeed a delightful Poetess, James :)
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October 1, 2013 at 8:14 PM
nette, awesome poem.............SKAT
Gasun Avatar
September 30, 2013 at 8:40 AM
An excellent poem expressing admiration of the amazing beauty of nature my dear friend Nette! My biggest hearty congratulations on your super win! Cheers & hugs! love lots, Leonora
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September 29, 2013 at 9:00 PM
You must have been a delightful child. I so enjoyed your winning poem.
Adams Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 7:34 PM
this one is so beautiful...it reminded me of my own childhood and all the shells painted and worn....thanks for the trip down memory lane and congrats on your first place win :)
Richards Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 5:32 PM
This was perfectly lovely, Nette! Congratulations!!
Michelle Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 11:40 AM
Congratulations and thank you for your poem. It was beautiful and definitely deserved recognition. Love, Juli-Michelle
Goff Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 9:19 PM
A beautiful memory from the Phillippines! Thanks Nette!
Tacito Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 5:15 PM
How heart-warming!!!!!!!!!!! I loved this! What a beautiful environment you created!
Poet Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 1:14 PM
Beautiful Sonnet here Nette!Enjoyed a lot.
Poet Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 1:33 PM
Hugggsss!!
Sathasivam Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 4:55 AM
Excellent. Very creative write. Enjoyed. Tfs
Jones Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 9:29 PM
Sweet beautiful memories and lovely written....thanks for the name donns nette..I've never had a nickname before..makes me feel liked....:-)
Sivey Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 6:31 PM
Those are some very sentimental memories you have Nette, they will be with you always! And these thoughts of seashells will always be a part of you and you have imparted some of that feel onto me by your glorious poem here my friend! Thank you for sharing this illustrious and fantastic write! What a wonderful piece, Great Work!!
Chircop Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 4:28 PM
aw..how beautiful these childhood memories..I love sea shells and this penned beauty
Kendrick Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 3:31 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work.Reads like you and your aunt enjoyed playing on the beach..Sara
Kendrick Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 3:32 PM
Thanks for the vists to my page..Sara
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