Searching the Tapestry of Youth

In the pediment of the blue hills rolling from the horizon
young eastern sun spread surreal splendor on landscape
with carvings of meandered streams, verdant meadows,
transparent ponds, thriving thickets and emerald vales.
My youth embedded in naïvety of juvenile exuberance
fluttered on wings of indigo birds scaling the cerulean sky
like my multicolored kites flying at fringe of fleeting clouds, 
in their adrift enigmatic shadows etched on the sprawl
I saw my freak fantasy take nebulous shapes I marveled, 
wondering what they meant, they were so expressive
in the intricate play of the opposites, light and shade,
like the pattern sunbeams created piercing the foliage
in the forest where I ventured chasing the butterflies,
or like dancing design the lengthening sunset shadows
the trees made on the pond rippled at sailing swan’s wake
I followed swimming away from the seething summer heat. 

The infantile motifs engraved in the ductile young mind
trampled by the footsteps that have walked me so far away,
lie buried under the dust time blew across the uprooted life.
Now at the edge of falling night I trace the faint footprint trail
to search beneath the dust the frayed tapestry of my youth.

December 11, 2018
2019 Poetry Marathon Final Placement
Sponsor : Mark Toney
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Ashley Avatar
June 8, 2019 at 7:54 PM
Your beautiful memories are enlivened by your superb imagery, Subimal. Every line is a poetic gem. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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June 6, 2019 at 11:51 AM
This poem is gorgeous Subimal! Your imagery left me breathless with its glorious visions. Congratulations on your deserving second place winning honor! xxoo ; )
Dietrich Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 3:57 PM
Deep, beautiful, and nostalgic, Subimal. Love this one. Congrats in the marathon.
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April 20, 2019 at 11:23 PM
Back with more congrats, Subimal.
Toney Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 4:56 PM
Subimal, after 122 days, 27 contests, and 945 submitted poems, my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest has finally come to its end. Congratulations on placing 29th overall in the marathon! There is no provision to denote this in the Standard Contest other than Honorable Mention. Your participation in my contests is much appreciated. ~Mark
Gauthier Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 9:48 PM
Congrats on your win, Subimal. Well done.
Haight Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 4:36 PM
Subimal, congratulations on your fine placement in the marathon contest. Such wonderful imagery of things you love and miss portrayed in your beautiful poem. Hugs, Sandra
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January 31, 2019 at 1:40 AM
What amazing descriptions, Sublimal. How wonderful that when we can't physically return to places we have known and loved in the past, we can return there in the mind's imagination. Congratulations on your win.
Toney Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 10:09 PM
Subimal, a lovely retrospection mixed with melancholy. Congratulations on your win on mile 13 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon contest! Thank you so much for supporting my contests. By continuing to place in the contests you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
Callus Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 1:38 PM
Excellent imagery adorning your beautiful memories, Subimal. Maybe buried beneath the dust, but soon coming into view as the wind blows the dust away! Congratulations on placing first! Regards // paul
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December 15, 2018 at 2:47 PM
What splendid imagery you employ throughout this touching poem, Subimal. Congratulations on a top win in Craig's contest! Sending wishes for holiday cheer, Carolyn
Barden Avatar
December 15, 2018 at 10:45 AM
Sincere congratulations on your win in Craig's "My Youth" contest, Subimal - blessings and best wishes to you and yours for a wonderful holiday season! Keep the wonderful ink flowing, my friend! :-)
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