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Searching In the Afternoon

Searching in the afternoon A blue lagoon With your boat Towards a coat of your touch On my water and grass Carefully amassed Along the path of Bread and butter Sometimes a sunrise Of poetry so nice Turning me into a blue magpie Far above the clutter Littering the floor and furniture Of mind Will you be kind now To get me grape and akhrot In the blue boat A rhythm Of poem From whispering mist Between the doors of whispers Of olive green molecules 22/11/2017

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Date: 11/29/2017 12:52:00 PM
Love all the imagery , hugs eve
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/1/2017 9:23:00 AM
Thank you, Eve for liking the imagery ... If a reader gathers the impression after reading the poem that it is about a kitty making a clatter, then it is so to him or her ... While composing, the images came in a succession that normally cannot be a clutter ...
Date: 11/25/2017 11:54:00 AM
Very deep in thought, Probir!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/28/2017 7:37:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 11/25/2017 10:17:00 AM
Such a beautiful imagery... I really loved it... Thanks for sharing...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/28/2017 7:38:00 AM
Thank you ...

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