Searching In the Afternoon

Searching in the afternoon
A blue lagoon
With your boat
Towards a coat of your touch
On my water and grass
Carefully amassed
Along the path of
Bread and butter
Sometimes a sunrise
Of poetry so nice
Turning me into a blue magpie
Far above the clutter
Littering the floor and furniture
Of mind
Will you be kind now
To get me grape and akhrot
In the blue boat
A rhythm
Of poem
From whispering mist
Between the doors of whispers
Of olive green molecules

22/11/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Roper Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 12:52 PM
Love all the imagery , hugs eve
Gupta Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 9:23 AM
Thank you, Eve for liking the imagery ... If a reader gathers the impression after reading the poem that it is about a kitty making a clatter, then it is so to him or her ... While composing, the images came in a succession that normally cannot be a clutter ...
Pandit Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 11:54 AM
Very deep in thought, Probir!
Gupta Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 7:37 AM
Thank you ...
Kannan Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 10:17 AM
Such a beautiful imagery... I really loved it... Thanks for sharing...
Gupta Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 7:38 AM
Thank you ...
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