Searching Heaven

through the eye 
of an needle 
in sandstorms 
of life 
I glimpse 
you in heaven 

rich in loves thread 
I begin to 
weave love 
spun silver 
in the deepest depths 
I found you 

the light 
becomes your stage 
my crusade
 to love 
surrounded in 
lights armor 
my crystalised heart 

in the flicker 
of a thousand candles 
each flicker 
my soul flies 
a kaelidescope 
of lights colour 
fluttering
my souls eye

my diamond treasure 
touching  
a night's sky 
as the moon 
it smiles

 upon you stars
like diamonds 
they surround you 
confetti 
in the air 

one star
twinkles in the eye 
a shooting 
across the night sky 
wishing upon 
you sprinkle heaven 
as the sun smiles 

radiant warmth 
upon my pillow 
an oasis of love 
my beautiful mirage 
only in dreams 
I found you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/10/2013 12:35:00 AM
This one captured me the most as I read through most of your work. I could feel the brightness and open space as your choice imagery transported me there. Your ending compelled me to sigh, disappointed it was only a dream. Amazing read, thanks for sharing Liam
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Date: 9/29/2013 6:23:00 PM
Your poem is rich with beauty. I'm running out of words to say Liam so when you hear the first quack just nod your head...lol.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/29/2013 6:59:00 PM
quack has a bone to with you ha ha thank you dearly my friend deeply appreciated
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