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Searching For Summer

Nasty old winter is getting me down I'm looking for summer all over town I lift up a blanket of snow off the ground Sadly there is no green grass to be found My very next stop I'll go down to the beach With waves and sand summer may be in reach The lake is solid like a piece of glass No sign of summer I'm freezing my ass Summer summer reveal yourself to me Sun warm my face place leaves on a tree Hey wait a minute is that a red Rose? I pick it up, place it under my nose I'm so sad to say, the rose isn't real You can imagine how sad I now feel My search is over I know when I'm licked As I head home I'm feeling real ticked I see a young woman walking my way Wearing a bikini on this cold day A glimpse of summer my heart starts to race I'm confused, yet there's a smile on my face Searching for Summer contest By Richard Lamoureux March 14, 2013

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Date: 3/28/2013 9:42:00 PM
Congratulations, with your winning poem Richard , I'm also stopping by to say hi, and wish you an early Happy Easter, just in case I don't have time to stop by in the next few days. take care and have yourself a good one~ Always & Forever *LINDA"
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Date: 3/28/2013 3:24:00 PM
Thank you for entering my contest
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/28/2013 9:12:00 PM
My pleasure
Date: 3/25/2013 2:26:00 PM
Congrats, Richard. Excellent. Nice going. Kudos. Ralph
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/28/2013 9:07:00 PM
First time someone has given me Kudos, are they contagious? Sorry I couldn't resist *lol*. Thanks for commenting.
Date: 3/25/2013 12:00:00 PM
Congrats on the place, Richard!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/28/2013 9:02:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 3/25/2013 8:06:00 AM
Lovely poem Richard....many congrats...Donna
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Date: 3/15/2013 4:37:00 PM
It sounds like you were having a dream, my friend and a very nice one at the end of it!! Cool poem.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/28/2013 9:01:00 PM
;0)
Date: 3/15/2013 4:35:00 PM
Hi Richard, enjoyed your amusing tone that tells the tale we all share, why is it not warm yet!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/28/2013 9:00:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 3/14/2013 6:44:00 PM
I'm lucky to be living in sunny South Africa, which is living up to its name at the moment. Lovely ending. lol. A good contest entry, my friend. Good luck. :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/14/2013 7:05:00 PM
Sounds delightful. Thanks for taking time to read and comment.
Date: 3/14/2013 2:10:00 PM
"The lake is solid like a piece of glass / No sign of summer I'm freezing my ass" - As a fellow Canadian, I SO understand that feeling! haha. You rocked this one, my friend. Your humour gets me everytime!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/14/2013 2:12:00 PM
Thanks Heather, you are very good for my ego.
Date: 3/14/2013 1:49:00 PM
Richard, This is the 1st of your works I've stumbled upon & have to tell ya: "Its the bomb"! (That means I absolutely LUV IT! GREAT sense of humor - wish I had some of it. Can't wait to read more of your excellent poetics. Cheers, Terry
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/14/2013 1:52:00 PM
Thanks Terill, make yourself at home. Nice to meet new people.
Date: 3/14/2013 12:37:00 PM
I'm drooling, you devil you... can't get the image of this bikini clad beauty out of my mind! Delicious! LOL
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/14/2013 2:05:00 PM
Enjoy my friend
Date: 3/14/2013 10:38:00 AM
loved it, was tee shirt weather this morning and fur lined knickers this afternoon, doesnt make sense this weather business......Seren
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/14/2013 2:05:00 PM
I love the new Photo Seren
Date: 3/14/2013 9:00:00 AM
It's already warm where I am...great for the contest, Richard. Good luck...and thanks for the correction...haha...can't believe that one slipped me!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/14/2013 9:32:00 AM
no worries, happens to me all the time.
Date: 3/14/2013 8:55:00 AM
Oh Richard....how cute! ;) You should be in Beirut right now. I'm in short sleeves with the door of my living room flung open...the sunlight is steaming in. Spring is doing a jig...and later...I'm going power walking! Canada is really TOO cold! My brother did his Ph.D in Calgary and married a Canadian...Let's just say...she doesn't want to go back home, but loves it here! Come visit! ;)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/15/2013 5:20:00 AM
Sister-in-law is from your neck of the woods! ;) Still...she loves Lebanon!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/14/2013 9:34:00 AM
I am Jealous! Mind you I just got home from Mexico so I guess I can't really complain. Where I live is considered Desert, the hot spot of canada. Google Kelowna/ Okanagan it is really a four season playground here.

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