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Searching for a Dream

I searched endlessly for my dream. Impossible to find is what it seemed. Hoping one day I would find the light. That light came to me when you came in sight. I felt something special about you, and I was right. When I met you and got to know you I was done searching, because I found my dream in you. My dream wasn't about fortune or fame. I had love in me, and I sought a woman who felt the same. I made a list of everything I wanted in a woman. I ended up drawing a picture of you. Time passed, and our feelings for each other grew. Grew so much that I got to that point where I finally knew that I loved you.

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Date: 6/9/2025 6:26:00 AM
Was this a recent therapy write or did you NEED to pen it for that purpose years ago? (read below) and, no, it isn't your style but it's the style of a poet who needs to pen pain to release it to some degree. I regret the pain you have hopefully made 'friends' with like a companion that won't leave. I know pain. Pause - hugging you. Pain makes great poets - a flute can't play beautiful notes until it first feels the pain of a knife's blade (jest of something I didn't make up) CayCay
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Date: 6/8/2025 7:05:00 PM
took a long time to find out! just kidding, lovely thoughts, Ron
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Ron VanHooser
Date: 6/8/2025 7:14:00 PM
The search was a product of the loneliness following the death of my first wife. Yes, it did seem endless. Thank you for the compliments, I'm pleased you liked it, this poem was a departure from my usual work. Thanks again! Ron

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