Sealed With a Bilberry Kiss

Those indigo jeans worn this special day
When he invited me on my  first date
Very appropriate ~trip to park_ play
Lunch from a vendor sharing plate

As our hands touch, look in his eyes_ see deep
The desire to get closer as knees touch
Feelings transpire,  much desire from heartdeep
Overcome with passion's heat, face feels a blush

Such a romantic setting_ lovely pond
Jeweled around neck with water lilies
Flying birds, swans of lake stilled as lovers kiss~bond
Closing kiss, lover friend picks bilberries

Bilberries color of indigo seal kiss
Lips matching jeans~day continue bliss

(Heartdeep is rooted in the heart..Bilberries are closely
related to  American Blueberries or Huckleberries..)

Contest:"It's In The Jeans"
Sponsor:Nette Onclaud
Written by: Sara Kendrick

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/15/2011 2:56:00 PM
Thought I'd read your older stuff as I've seen your new poems - this is beautiful, Sara : )
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Date: 6/18/2011 4:20:00 PM
really enjoyed this romantic piece of tender poetry.
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Date: 6/16/2011 3:32:00 AM
Beautifully romantic write, Sara. Love the imagery "Jeweled around the neck with water lilies", as though a Polynesian leis necklace.:) Congratulations on your placing, this looks like a winner to me! Best wishes, Mikki
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Date: 6/15/2011 5:21:00 PM
Awesome write once again Sara. congratulations on your top win
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Date: 6/15/2011 10:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Jeans" contest Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/15/2011 9:34:00 AM
So happy for your big win, Sara! Congratulations. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/15/2011 8:42:00 AM
beautiful. Many congrats to you, Sara : )
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Date: 6/15/2011 7:50:00 AM
Congrats Sara on your wonderful win in nette's contest..beautiful memories..love, gautami
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Date: 6/15/2011 6:28:00 AM
My congratulations on the second place win in the contest, sara
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Date: 6/15/2011 5:53:00 AM
Oh great to know about bilberries, really huckleberry too? same as blueberry? Congrad's on this sweet winning memory! Light & Love
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Date: 6/14/2011 11:56:00 PM
Passionate Sonnet here Sara...enjoyed.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/14/2011 9:22:00 PM
I like how you related the blue color berries to the blue jeans. Cool idea. Congrats on your big win, Sara.
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Date: 6/14/2011 8:24:00 PM
Congrats Sara on your super second place in the contest with this awesome write luv..
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Date: 6/13/2011 1:32:00 PM
Awesome write dear poet ! Oh those memorries ! *smiles* Have a fantastic week my friend ! Much love, james
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Date: 6/13/2011 8:08:00 AM
simply beautiful expression of that first young luv with special setting of that pond jeweled with lilies.. and jeans touching ..wow.. super imaginative write Sara.. good luck in the contest.. Nette will surely luv..
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Date: 6/13/2011 8:06:00 AM
Seems to me I've seen a like setting before. Where was it - Golden Gate Park? No matter. Nice loving story. Love, daver
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Date: 6/13/2011 6:58:00 AM
Very romantic sara and well penned.I wish you all the best and lots of joy and love
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Date: 6/13/2011 5:55:00 AM
Mine was true I guessed easily yours is. I love those beautiful emotions you convey giving warmth and depth and returns me to one time particularly remember well. Thanks for that.I will I read more of yours soon.Terence was a g/g/grandfather Surname McSharry being Irish For Foley (nickname Griffiths)- Rgds Ian Foley P.S Terence was a great g/father called McSharry in Iirsh Foley English.
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