Sealed With a Bilberry Kiss

Those indigo jeans worn this special day
When he invited me on my  first date
Very appropriate ~trip to park_ play
Lunch from a vendor sharing plate

As our hands touch, look in his eyes_ see deep
The desire to get closer as knees touch
Feelings transpire,  much desire from heartdeep
Overcome with passion's heat, face feels a blush

Such a romantic setting_ lovely pond
Jeweled around neck with water lilies
Flying birds, swans of lake stilled as lovers kiss~bond
Closing kiss, lover friend picks bilberries

Bilberries color of indigo seal kiss
Lips matching jeans~day continue bliss

(Heartdeep is rooted in the heart..Bilberries are closely
related to  American Blueberries or Huckleberries..)

Contest:"It's In The Jeans"
Sponsor:Nette Onclaud
Written by: Sara Kendrick
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Horne Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 2:56 PM
Thought I'd read your older stuff as I've seen your new poems - this is beautiful, Sara : )
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June 18, 2011 at 4:20 PM
really enjoyed this romantic piece of tender poetry.
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June 16, 2011 at 3:32 AM
Beautifully romantic write, Sara. Love the imagery "Jeweled around the neck with water lilies", as though a Polynesian leis necklace.:) Congratulations on your placing, this looks like a winner to me! Best wishes, Mikki
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June 15, 2011 at 5:21 PM
Awesome write once again Sara. congratulations on your top win
Brown Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 10:11 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Jeans" contest Sara. Love, Carol
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June 15, 2011 at 9:34 AM
So happy for your big win, Sara! Congratulations. Love, Carolyn
Horne Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 8:42 AM
beautiful. Many congrats to you, Sara : )
Phookan Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 7:50 AM
Congrats Sara on your wonderful win in nette's contest..beautiful memories..love, gautami
Mehta Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 6:28 AM
My congratulations on the second place win in the contest, sara
Guzzi Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 5:53 AM
Oh great to know about bilberries, really huckleberry too? same as blueberry? Congrad's on this sweet winning memory! Light & Love
Poet Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 11:56 PM
Passionate Sonnet here Sara...enjoyed.Congrats on your win.
Dietrich Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 9:22 PM
I like how you related the blue color berries to the blue jeans. Cool idea. Congrats on your big win, Sara.
Sweetheart Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 8:24 PM
Congrats Sara on your super second place in the contest with this awesome write luv..
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June 13, 2011 at 1:32 PM
Awesome write dear poet ! Oh those memorries ! *smiles* Have a fantastic week my friend ! Much love, james
Sweetheart Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 8:08 AM
simply beautiful expression of that first young luv with special setting of that pond jeweled with lilies.. and jeans touching ..wow.. super imaginative write Sara.. good luck in the contest.. Nette will surely luv..
Austin Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 8:06 AM
Seems to me I've seen a like setting before. Where was it - Golden Gate Park? No matter. Nice loving story. Love, daver
Godwyn Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 6:58 AM
Very romantic sara and well penned.I wish you all the best and lots of joy and love
Foley Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 5:55 AM
Mine was true I guessed easily yours is. I love those beautiful emotions you convey giving warmth and depth and returns me to one time particularly remember well. Thanks for that.I will I read more of yours soon.Terence was a g/g/grandfather Surname McSharry being Irish For Foley (nickname Griffiths)- Rgds Ian Foley P.S Terence was a great g/father called McSharry in Iirsh Foley English.
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