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Seahorses, of Course

  ~                                                                                             o
   ~~                                                                                     o
~                                                                              o  o
                     ^^                                                               o  o   
                      I must                                                         o          ~~     ~~
                      affirm some                                        o      o   
                       sage  @  advice,                                 o
                        in case you were to happen           o
                            to spy some horses.
                              Horses
                               off course!
                                Colorful horses,
                                  swimming along
                                    against the tide!
                                    Let's not assume,
             **                   persuade or guide.
       worm!                     abuse their pride,
         a                   or presume, of course,
          are           they're a squirmy source
                you         to take a ride,..         
                     unless
       
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4/14/18 Seahorse Contest
Sponsor : Julia Ward
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Haight Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 8:27 AM
A wonderful Concrete poem, Carrie! Very creative and clever! Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 11:00 PM
So adorable. Congrats on your well deserved win,, Carrie. Delightful.
Gentry Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 10:09 PM
Oh this is beautiful! Congratulations on your clever seahorse poem. This is awesome.
Roper Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 7:19 PM
Amazing, Carrie, great shape and verse...congratulations on this wonderful write.. Hugs
Ashley Avatar
April 22, 2018 at 9:05 PM
Ohh, so lovely and creative Carrie! A fun and fabulous poem. Best wishes for a win!
Callus Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 9:56 AM
I love your cute seahorse, water and bubbles, Carrie! The poem is pleasant and witty. Regards // paul
Smith Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 1:22 PM
Wonderful work Carrie, best wishes...
Gauthier Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 1:28 AM
What a beautiful and original poem, Carrie. Really adorable and fun.
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