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Seagulls

Squalling seagulls sip the morning sunshine, in an eternal war of sea and shore; there is something so haunting in their whine, when a single call turns to a loud roar. In an eternal war of sea and shore, the seagulls- on wind currents soar and glide; when a single call turns to a loud roar, on beaches these birds gracefully walk- stride. The seagulls- on wind currents- soar and glide, such a view of serenity and peace; on beaches these birds gracefully walk- stride, of my lunch, I happily share a piece. Such a view of ~.~ serenity and peace, from graceful to a powerful diver; of my lunch . . . I happily share a piece, the seagulls life is that of- survivor. From graceful to a powerful diver, there is something so haunting in their whine; the seagulls life is that of . . . survivor, squalling seagulls sip the morning sunshine. _________________________ November 29, 2019 Poetry/Pantoum/Seagulls Copyright Protected. ID 19-1204-090-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Seagulls sponsor, Eve Roper First Place
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Kauffman Avatar
December 21, 2019 at 12:04 PM
Hi Connie, Congrats on your win! Beautifully done.
La France Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 2:15 PM
Sam thanks for visiting with the beautiful and the congrats !
Na Avatar
December 20, 2019 at 2:02 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Constance
La France Avatar
December 20, 2019 at 4:15 PM
Greg, thanks so much for the congrats !
Na Avatar
November 29, 2019 at 7:08 PM
Hi Constance this was very good. you used your mind well. I didnt know this was still going on. As I did mine a while back. Best of luck to you and thanks for sharing this
La France Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 10:50 AM
Greg, thanks for the compliment, I find these Pantoums very difficult to write with the repeating lines it is hard to make the poem make sense, do you find that also probably not as you are such a fantastic writer !
Sands Avatar
November 29, 2019 at 4:58 PM
Well written Dear Heart. Good luck in the contest :)
La France Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 10:49 AM
Heidi, thank for visiting and for the compliment !
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