Seagull

seagull soars catching breeze then dives 'pon turtle pond... turtle soup in shell

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/11/2013 1:02:00 AM

Nicely done. You are a haiku wizard.

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 6/10/2013 7:08:00 PM

I like your Haiku Sara,very nice :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/10/2013 3:00:00 PM

I'm so glad to be able to read another poem by you again, welcome back, we've missed you! My brother's been in town and I've been away myself for a few days, now it's back to normal! You have pleased me with this incredible poem! What a glorious piece, such a tremendous write, Great Work!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/10/2013 2:54:00 PM

One fine haiku dear Sara..Excellent indeed. Hope you doris and all at home are fine.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/10/2013 10:43:00 AM

to read you again brings me pleasure, sara.. what an amazing turm-around, this 'ku; sumptuous!... how are you? :) huggs