Sea Wonders

¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ Sea, ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦¦¦ sand, pebbles,
¦¦¦¦¦¦ shells.

¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦
bubbles rising.

¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦ slow-
motion ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦

¦¦¦ fishery ¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦
¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦
collecting
plankton ¦¦¦¦¦¦ and fauna.

¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ visible
sea ¦¦¦¦¦¦
sponge and kelpleaf.
Halicystus ¦¦¦ Sea Bottle

resembles emeralds
¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦¦ in the world.

Young sea horse
¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ twenty
minutes old,

¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦

¦¦¦ radiates on
¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦
a comb of twenty

upright spines
and curls
its ¦¦¦¦¦ tail.

¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ swims

backwards from the rock.



From The Collected Poems of Carl Rakosi. Copyright © 1986 by Callman Rawley.


(Blackout of The Lobster by Carl Rakosi)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 3:21 AM
Sea wonders indeed found between the blacked out words.
Kitchin Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 10:37 AM
Alison, thank you.
Andresen Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 2:06 AM
- Great written, Tania :) - hugs
Kitchin Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 3:13 AM
Anne-Lise, thank you.
Cunningham Avatar
August 5, 2026 at 9:35 PM
You and Lin are getting quite good at this, I thought blacking out words would 'kill' the poem but it doesn't. Tom🌹
Kitchin Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 3:13 AM
Tom, thank you. It's fun, you should try it.
Lane Avatar
August 5, 2026 at 8:26 PM
I feel Like I just went on a dive with you. Good work.
Kitchin Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 3:14 AM
Lin, thank you.
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