Sea Tales

.                                            Alive...
.                                     the sea        ..
.                     skins the globes
.                ever beating heart
.     To depth untold…as of old                          Alive...
.    fissures open, part and part                 the sea       ...
Infinite the brash bold wave, whose     ever beating
origin defeats the convoluted skull caste mind
all rationale retreats. Liquid, luminous, laughter’s lee                              Alive...
the hidden hearts source pounding sea. Alive, alive, fresh free….      the sea         ....
Return, depart, with missives free…of dangerrrrr, darknessss, and deep
where sailors     linger	 e	tern	allyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy...............
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Allison Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 3:37 PM
WOW What a creative gem of a poem Debbie - many congrats - Chase sure has great taste!!! Hugs jan xxx
Haight Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 9:36 AM
Congratulations on your win for your amazing Concrete poem, Debbie! I love the verbal imagery and the artistic wave shape you have created. Hugs, Sandra
Callus Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 8:16 AM
Hi Debbie! Your shape reminds me of waves rising up from the sea...alive and bold. A unique take on a theme that you have exploited to the full. Excellent! ~ Congratulations on placing first! ~ Regards // paul
A. Sharma Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 2:53 AM
Ah that's really creative, Congrats on first place win Debbie!
Cheema Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 9:20 PM
Congrats Debbie on your first placement!
Dietrich Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 8:28 PM
oooh, clever formatting. Fresh and innovative work. Congrats.
Leiser Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 7:57 PM
Wonderful Congrats on your 1st place win, Debbie! Creative in shape and form :)
Richards Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 7:56 PM
So clever are you!! Not only perfectly versed, but fun as well! (Would also be the perfect entry to the contest sponsored by Constance (Broken Wings) !!! Congrats to you Deb!
T  Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 6:44 PM
Creative! Captured by the wave. CT
Brown Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 6:02 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win in Craig's "Concrete/Shape" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Song Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 10:31 AM
Back 4 a reread! U really went all out! gwendolen
A   Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 10:29 PM
D..GUZZI. CONGRATULATIONS... WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN IN GRAIGS CONTEST....XOXOXOX~PD
Merryman Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 5:15 PM
Fantastic write, Debbie! Love how you did the shape. Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim
Onclaud Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 4:06 PM
yowsah, debbie... very creative form and lively contest.. congrats on your top win!..:)huggs!
Song Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 2:53 PM
Wow! This is terrific! Congrats on this outstanding poem!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 2:19 PM
Congrats on your first place win, Debbie! Awesome!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Richards Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 1:58 PM
Wahoooo!! Terrific!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 1:09 PM
Congratulations Debbie great shape what a whizz you are xx
Kendrick Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 1:02 PM
Congrats on your creative win..Sara
Muzzey Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 12:35 PM
Congratulations Debbie, on your 1st place win with this wonderfully awesome amazing write. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
Williams Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 12:11 PM
Debbie congrats on your superb win, just excellent poem and shape..David
Spears Avatar
May 27, 2010 at 6:44 PM
Amazing! I can feel the waves moving. Happy writing!
Gorelick Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 2:04 PM
Its great! It made me seasick!...congrats Deb on your success in the contest. BG
Sweetheart Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 12:30 PM
TEACH an artist too? well congrats Debbie on your winning 3rd place with this great design and poem.. a well earned victory ..pupil...
Green Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 12:29 PM
Very fine concrete. As someone below wrote- this poem is alive- in verse and shape. Congrats on your win. Excellent!
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