Sea Tales

. Alive... . the sea .. . skins the globes . ever beating heart . To depth untold…as of old Alive... . fissures open, part and part the sea ... Infinite the brash bold wave, whose ever beating origin defeats the convoluted skull caste mind all rationale retreats. Liquid, luminous, laughter’s lee Alive... the hidden hearts source pounding sea. Alive, alive, fresh free…. the sea .... Return, depart, with missives free…of dangerrrrr, darknessss, and deep where sailors linger e tern allyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy...............

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Jan Allison

Date: 10/23/2015 3:37:00 PM

WOW What a creative gem of a poem Debbie - many congrats - Chase sure has great taste!!! Hugs jan xxx

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/23/2015 9:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win for your amazing Concrete poem, Debbie! I love the verbal imagery and the artistic wave shape you have created. Hugs, Sandra

Paul Callus

Date: 10/23/2015 8:16:00 AM

Hi Debbie! Your shape reminds me of waves rising up from the sea...alive and bold. A unique take on a theme that you have exploited to the full. Excellent! ~ Congratulations on placing first! ~ Regards // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/23/2015 2:53:00 AM

Ah that's really creative, Congrats on first place win Debbie!

Balveen Cheema

Date: 10/22/2015 9:20:00 PM

Congrats Debbie on your first placement!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/22/2015 8:28:00 PM

oooh, clever formatting. Fresh and innovative work. Congrats.

Laura Leiser

Date: 10/22/2015 7:57:00 PM

Wonderful Congrats on your 1st place win, Debbie! Creative in shape and form :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/22/2015 7:56:00 PM

So clever are you!! Not only perfectly versed, but fun as well! (Would also be the perfect entry to the contest sponsored by Constance (Broken Wings) !!! Congrats to you Deb!