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Sea Story

Dancing Water

silk cobalt tide
narwhals take a dive 
How deep is the big sea?

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/23/2015 2:59:00 AM

Congrats on ur wonderful win with this superb write Linda!

Balveen Cheema

Date: 10/22/2015 9:39:00 PM

Congrats ! A sweet simple questionku !

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/22/2015 8:21:00 PM

Congrad's on your win a great sea story! Light & Love

C T

Date: 10/22/2015 6:47:00 PM

CUTE. CT

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/12/2015 12:42:00 AM

I love this... the sea is so mysterious and delightful... "silk cobalt tide"... lovely description... Always, Laura

Len Gasun

Date: 8/26/2014 9:23:00 AM

Hello my loving sis! Dropping by to enjoy once again this awesome questionku of yours and also to thank you for another honor and win in your contest. Thank you soo much for appreciating my entry/poem! Sending you huge hugs smiles & kisses! God bless! lovem4eversis-BFF Leonora

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2014 7:44:00 PM

I just love this one, PD. Please will you soupmail me what i did wrong? your contest does not say we have to use that specific title, but do you prefer it? thanks for letting me know soon?? Luv, Andrea

Joseph May

Date: 6/10/2014 6:46:00 AM

Very nice questionku Linda...hugs

Cherl Dunn

Date: 1/19/2014 7:11:00 PM

How deep is the depth of how much a friend means to me, it is without fathoms measurement, no degrees boundary, but the heart within is full of happiness because of the richness she has added to my life. thank you linda you have destroyed my pain and replaced it with friendship. cheri

Len Gasun

Date: 9/17/2013 9:47:00 AM

Hi, my everdearest sis! I've already posted my new (rush) poem ;)). I hope you'll go and read it if you have time. I was thinking actually to enter that in your contest in lieu of the Ice King which I've already entered in your contest. But, I'm not sure which one is better ;)) Well,can't stop thanking you so much for everything esp. your very precious gems/stellar writes Hugging them all & U. I'm so sorry if I kept you waiting . My internet is quite slow. More hugs!. lovem4evrLeo

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/10/2013 12:45:00 PM

PRETTY DEEP LINDA WELLIES WOULD BE NO GOOD HA HA

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/13/2013 10:12:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this one..Great question at the end..Thanks for the visit..Sara

Gerald Kithinji

Date: 7/28/2013 1:01:00 PM

I have just come from Mombasa... and here you are sending me back there. Wonderful! How many crabs did I see?

Mitch White

Date: 7/17/2013 12:08:00 AM

It is a wonderfull poem with an interesting Q. I love your pic, You look so young and content. Anyway really nice to see your face. Mayby I will post my mug soon. Smiles

Marisa Moynihan

Date: 7/10/2013 4:20:00 PM

I love your poem. It makes me think and imagine the possibilities of the sea.

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 6/14/2013 5:38:00 PM

Nicely penned Linda.

Kate Wilderson

Date: 6/11/2013 7:44:00 PM

Amazing! Beauty in such a few words...I enjoyed reading this.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/5/2013 9:54:00 PM

Well I've come back to this. I do love the sea. Have an awesome day Linda xo's ;}

Len Gasun

Date: 5/21/2013 4:24:00 PM

Good morning my ever dearest sis! Big hugs! I woke up so early today. I've got a bulk of work last night so I missed the soup. Reading this amazing haiku of yours once again inspires me as I start a new da. I truly love so much the image of the dancing water. Thanks a lot again for sharing and the very wonderful comments on my poems. Big sweetest hugs! I'll come back this afternoon/evening. God bless you and take care always! love much 4ever, Leonora

Debbie Duncan

Date: 5/21/2013 5:04:00 AM

nicely done PD ;}, Happy Mothers Day to you as well ;} a little late but, but still heart felt ;}

Mario De Paz

Date: 5/14/2013 10:37:00 AM

Maybe you are a poetdistroyer, but this simple poem on dancing water is a real construction. I love it

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 5/6/2013 6:50:00 PM

My first love was the sea, long before I saw her. Nothing like a tropical night with Jimmy Buffet singing A Prate looks at Forty

Dr. Vandana Sharma

Date: 5/4/2013 1:30:00 PM

INDEED SEA DEPTH IS VAST..... THANKYOU FOR VISITING BY AND FOR ALL THE ENCOURAGEMENT. I MA ALSO LOOKING FORWARD FOR A POETRY TREAT.

Mark Norton

Date: 5/4/2013 12:37:00 PM

to linda... i liked your poem, and that big sea is very,very deep. love mark

Wayland Bunch

Date: 5/1/2013 11:24:00 AM

How deep indeed. I guess to answer your previous comment, I am still out, but random mostly concealed visits keep me in the loop. I did not check the contest, but I must say congrats on your win. I like the poem. Although I usually choose many words over few, the right few words always have deep profound meaning. Great work.

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