Sea Story

Dancing Water

silk cobalt tide
narwhals take a dive 
How deep is the big sea?

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A. Sharma Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 2:59 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful win with this superb write Linda!
Cheema Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 9:39 PM
Congrats ! A sweet simple questionku !
Guzzi Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 8:21 PM
Congrad's on your win a great sea story! Light & Love
T  Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 6:47 PM
CUTE. CT
Breidenthal Avatar
August 12, 2015 at 12:42 AM
I love this... the sea is so mysterious and delightful... "silk cobalt tide"... lovely description... Always, Laura
Gasun Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 9:23 AM
Hello my loving sis! Dropping by to enjoy once again this awesome questionku of yours and also to thank you for another honor and win in your contest. Thank you soo much for appreciating my entry/poem! Sending you huge hugs smiles & kisses! God bless! lovem4eversis-BFF Leonora
Dietrich Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 7:44 PM
I just love this one, PD. Please will you soupmail me what i did wrong? your contest does not say we have to use that specific title, but do you prefer it? thanks for letting me know soon?? Luv, Andrea
May Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 6:46 AM
Very nice questionku Linda...hugs
Dunn Avatar
January 19, 2014 at 7:11 PM
How deep is the depth of how much a friend means to me, it is without fathoms measurement, no degrees boundary, but the heart within is full of happiness because of the richness she has added to my life. thank you linda you have destroyed my pain and replaced it with friendship. cheri
Gasun Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 9:47 AM
Hi, my everdearest sis! I've already posted my new (rush) poem ;)). I hope you'll go and read it if you have time. I was thinking actually to enter that in your contest in lieu of the Ice King which I've already entered in your contest. But, I'm not sure which one is better ;)) Well,can't stop thanking you so much for everything esp. your very precious gems/stellar writes Hugging them all & U. I'm so sorry if I kept you waiting . My internet is quite slow. More hugs!. lovem4evrLeo
Mcdaid Avatar
September 10, 2013 at 12:45 PM
PRETTY DEEP LINDA WELLIES WOULD BE NO GOOD HA HA
Kendrick Avatar
August 13, 2013 at 10:12 AM
Enjoyed reading this one..Great question at the end..Thanks for the visit..Sara
Kithinji Avatar
July 28, 2013 at 1:01 PM
I have just come from Mombasa... and here you are sending me back there. Wonderful! How many crabs did I see?
White Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 12:08 AM
It is a wonderfull poem with an interesting Q. I love your pic, You look so young and content. Anyway really nice to see your face. Mayby I will post my mug soon. Smiles
Moynihan Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 4:20 PM
I love your poem. It makes me think and imagine the possibilities of the sea.
Mohammed Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 5:38 PM
Nicely penned Linda.
Wilderson Avatar
June 11, 2013 at 7:44 PM
Amazing! Beauty in such a few words...I enjoyed reading this.
Duncan Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 9:54 PM
Well I've come back to this. I do love the sea. Have an awesome day Linda xo's ;}
Gasun Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 4:24 PM
Good morning my ever dearest sis! Big hugs! I woke up so early today. I've got a bulk of work last night so I missed the soup. Reading this amazing haiku of yours once again inspires me as I start a new da. I truly love so much the image of the dancing water. Thanks a lot again for sharing and the very wonderful comments on my poems. Big sweetest hugs! I'll come back this afternoon/evening. God bless you and take care always! love much 4ever, Leonora
Duncan Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 5:04 AM
nicely done PD ;}, Happy Mothers Day to you as well ;} a little late but, but still heart felt ;}
De Paz Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 10:37 AM
Maybe you are a poetdistroyer, but this simple poem on dancing water is a real construction. I love it
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
May 6, 2013 at 6:50 PM
My first love was the sea, long before I saw her. Nothing like a tropical night with Jimmy Buffet singing A Prate looks at Forty
Sharma Avatar
May 4, 2013 at 1:30 PM
INDEED SEA DEPTH IS VAST..... THANKYOU FOR VISITING BY AND FOR ALL THE ENCOURAGEMENT. I MA ALSO LOOKING FORWARD FOR A POETRY TREAT.
Norton Avatar
May 4, 2013 at 12:37 PM
to linda... i liked your poem, and that big sea is very,very deep. love mark
Bunch Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 11:24 AM
How deep indeed. I guess to answer your previous comment, I am still out, but random mostly concealed visits keep me in the loop. I did not check the contest, but I must say congrats on your win. I like the poem. Although I usually choose many words over few, the right few words always have deep profound meaning. Great work.
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