Sea Songs

Warbling crashing waves, Are in duet with the rocks: The tide sings aloud.

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Ismael Nieves

Date: 9/9/2009 5:07:00 PM

Beautiful melody, Raul. I appreciate your comments. from:I.N.

Cecil Hickman

Date: 9/1/2009 11:20:00 PM

a picture perfect Haiku, your visions are vivid to the reader,,and Thank you for holding the contest and for reading and commenting upon my words,,,blessings..Cecil

James Fraser

Date: 9/1/2009 10:57:00 AM

Melodic Haiku Raul, orchestral symphony drifts on the spray of your words, this poem is a beauty>>James

Abe Lopez

Date: 9/1/2009 8:16:00 AM

very nice my friend. a song sung daily enjoyed by many......

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/1/2009 7:42:00 AM

This takes me to my favorite place on the earth..the ocean. the tide does sing.. wonderful. BG

Christopher Higgins

Date: 9/1/2009 7:03:00 AM

The second line is amazing...duet with the rocks..freaking awesome.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/1/2009 6:33:00 AM

Nicely written haiku, thank you for your comments and congrats, I was reallly surprised that I placed, there are so many wonderful artist on the soup!

Charlene Bird

Date: 9/1/2009 6:06:00 AM

Lovely haiku Raul, I love to watch the waves sing to the rocks as it crashes over them. Beautiful title too!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/1/2009 4:40:00 AM

im singing i am:)i love the crashing of waves on the rocks,the splash sound....as the tide sings aloud--excellent--charma

James Peranteau

Date: 9/1/2009 3:55:00 AM

Raul,...now you've done it,...all I wanted to do this morn was to read some poetry,..now,..you have made me so excited with this write,..i want to make something sing as you have just done ! This one made my tea taste much better this morning Sir,...I thank you for this fantastic write! And this Sir is a wonderful example of an Haiku ! james

Sean Kelly

Date: 9/1/2009 3:44:00 AM

Great haiku , Raul . Could this be " rocks & roll" in the key of C ?? Write onnnnnn Haiku King .....