Sea Songs

Warbling crashing waves,
Are in duet with the rocks:
The tide sings aloud.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Nieves Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 5:07 PM
Beautiful melody, Raul. I appreciate your comments. from:I.N.
Hickman Avatar
September 1, 2009 at 11:20 PM
a picture perfect Haiku, your visions are vivid to the reader,,and Thank you for holding the contest and for reading and commenting upon my words,,,blessings..Cecil
Fraser Avatar
September 1, 2009 at 10:57 AM
Melodic Haiku Raul, orchestral symphony drifts on the spray of your words, this poem is a beauty>>James
Lopez Avatar
September 1, 2009 at 8:16 AM
very nice my friend. a song sung daily enjoyed by many......
Gorelick Avatar
September 1, 2009 at 7:42 AM
This takes me to my favorite place on the earth..the ocean. the tide does sing.. wonderful. BG
Higgins Avatar
September 1, 2009 at 7:03 AM
The second line is amazing...duet with the rocks..freaking awesome.
Culverhouse Avatar
September 1, 2009 at 6:33 AM
Nicely written haiku, thank you for your comments and congrats, I was reallly surprised that I placed, there are so many wonderful artist on the soup!
Bird Avatar
September 1, 2009 at 6:06 AM
Lovely haiku Raul, I love to watch the waves sing to the rocks as it crashes over them. Beautiful title too!
Chircop Avatar
September 1, 2009 at 4:40 AM
im singing i am:)i love the crashing of waves on the rocks,the splash sound....as the tide sings aloud--excellent--charma
Peranteau Avatar
September 1, 2009 at 3:55 AM
Raul,...now you've done it,...all I wanted to do this morn was to read some poetry,..now,..you have made me so excited with this write,..i want to make something sing as you have just done ! This one made my tea taste much better this morning Sir,...I thank you for this fantastic write! And this Sir is a wonderful example of an Haiku ! james
Kelly Avatar
September 1, 2009 at 3:44 AM
Great haiku , Raul . Could this be " rocks & roll" in the key of C ?? Write onnnnnn Haiku King .....
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