Sea Shoes

My wife's in the closet looking for shoes Three hundred pair, which will she choose I'm tired of living this way The closet is where she'll stay I'm locking her in and taking a cruise

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/6/2012 7:13:00 PM

good thought and smile...pd

Ralph Taylor

Date: 10/15/2010 7:02:00 PM

Nicely done, Pal. Excellent write. Ralph

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/15/2010 8:11:00 AM

Starting my weekend early reading all the amazing poetry of all the wonderful poets here at PoetrySoup. I am so happy to find your poetry posted here this morning Larry. Have a wonderful weekend and I hope you find tons of inspiration along the way as Fall is upon us. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/14/2010 5:57:00 PM

can I go? she won't know... LOL

Skat A

Date: 10/14/2010 5:32:00 PM

Hi, Larry~ENJOYED YOUR POEM~ Here I find myself all over the soup again. Stopping by to read many poems, before my crazy KIDS make me log out. I had a really nice time reading and catching up with you poets. Have a wonderful night*luv~SKAT"

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/14/2010 4:55:00 PM

Have fun...Don't forget your comfortable shoes..Sara