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Sea of Troubles

Calmness...flowing waves The tides...change Flows them back to rage

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Date: 3/23/2018 4:19:00 PM
Such wonderful use of metaphor.. The ebb and flow of shifting moods in life and/or love is brilliantly expressed in your beautiful haiku Laura. An intriguing poem that lets the reader imagine what would have shifted the idyllic calm 'back to rage'.. my thoughts - must be a man! :) Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/23/2018 11:00:00 PM
Thank you for your kind ponderings on my work, Susan. Change brings with it much tulmult at times. I'll be around your page again. I am in awe when I read your work. <3~Laura

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