Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

Sea of Roses

"A day goes better with pretty flowers." By Poet

What can I say,
your beautiful look takes my breath away.
Red roses tell a story of love and romance,
white roses show their innocence as they dance.
Pink roses are for me,
with pretty butterflies and that big yellow bee.
As we look out over the sea of roses,
the fragrance itches our sensitive noses.

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Karen Jones February 21, 2025 at 1:10 PM Congratulations on your win Paula! Paula Goldsmith February 22, 2025 at 7:25 AM Always great to see you back here. Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Sea of Roses" write again. I love pink roses the best but all roses are pretty." A day goes better with pretty flowers." Have a blessed day with some flowers on your desk..........

Paula Goldsmith February 21, 2025 at 7:02 AM "4 Place" Sea of Roses~Date Written: 2/7/2025 "Written By Human Poet"

Anne-Lise Andresen February 21, 2025 at 5:41 AM - Back with a well-deserved congratulations, Paula :) - hugs Paula Goldsmith February 21, 2025 at 7:28 AM Great to see you back. Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Sea of Roses" write again. Always great to see you here. I love pink roses the best but all are pretty." A day goes better with pretty flowers." Hugs... Have a blessed day with some flowers on your desk..........

Ink Empress February 21, 2025 at 4:19 AM As always dear paula this is such a cute and sweet poem woven from your soul! Love your use of the prompt! Thank you for supporting my contest, congrats on your placement Paula Goldsmith February 21, 2025 at 7:24 AM Great to see you. Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you found my "Sea of Roses" to be a, cute and sweet poem woven from your soul. I enjoyed bringing this one to life for your fun contest. Thanks for having it and for my placement. "A day goes better with pretty flowers." Have a blessed day with some flowers on your desk.............

Jennifer Proxenos February 15, 2025 at 5:53 AM Beautiful write dear friend, good luck in the contest. Love and hugs, Jennifer. Paula Goldsmith February 15, 2025 at 7:34 AM Great to see you. Thanks for reading/writing and for your good luck in the contest. Glad you found my "Sea of Roses" to be a, Beautiful write. Hugs... "A day goes better with pretty flowers." Have a blessed day with some flowers on your desk.............

Karen Jones February 12, 2025 at 11:35 PM Charming! Good luck in the contest Paula! Paula Goldsmith February 13, 2025 at 11:59 AM Great to see you. Thanks for reading/writing and for your Good luck in the contest. Glad you found my "Sea of Roses" write to be, Charming. I enjoyed writing this one. "A day goes better with pretty flowers." Have a blessed day with some flowers on your desk...........

Andrea Dietrich February 10, 2025 at 3:23 PM This is adorable! Paula Goldsmith February 13, 2025 at 11:56 AM Great to see you. Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Sea of Roses" write to be, adorable. It was so much fun to write. "A day goes better with pretty flowers." Have a blessed day with some flowers on your desk...........

Len Gasun February 9, 2025 at 1:53 AM Such an amazing and very creative rhyme poem my dear poet friend Paula. I love it a lot and immensely enjoyed. Rhymes flow smoothly. I'm sure it'll do well in the contest. Thank you so much for sharing. Best wishes always. Have a wonderful new week ahead! God bless you and your poetry. Hugs Paula Goldsmith February 9, 2025 at 9:50 AM Great to see you. Thanks for reading/writing and for your Best wishes always. Glad you found my "Sea of Roses" write to be, Such an amazing and very creative rhyme poem. I love pink roses and loved writing this one. Hugs... "A day goes better with pretty flowers." Have a blessed day with some flowers on your desk...........

Michael Tor February 8, 2025 at 11:48 PM nicely written Paula I can smell those fresh Roses, my wife Judy has a rose bush and every year we get beautiful Roses. Enjoyed reading this from you and made me think of our Roses. God bless you... Paula Goldsmith February 9, 2025 at 9:47 AM Great to see you. Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "Sea of Roses" write. You are blessed to have a rose bush. Wish I had one. I love pink the best but all are pretty. "A day goes better with pretty flowers." Have a blessed day with some flowers on your desk..........

Valsa George February 8, 2025 at 9:01 PM A lovely poem on roses. Roses are the darlings of every garden. It is the lovesome gift exchanged by lovers. Paula, you have highlighted the beauty and fragrance of roses. A beautifully rhyming poem. Paula Goldsmith February 9, 2025 at 9:45 AM Great to see you. Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Sea of Roses" write to be, A beautifully rhyming poem. Thanks... "A day goes better with pretty flowers." Have a blessed day with some flowers on your desk...........

Kim Rodrigues February 8, 2025 at 7:25 PM Cute and worthwhile write! Lots of colors and the switch in thought as to the sensitivity of a sea of roses. Hugs! Keep writing, dear Paula! Paula Goldsmith February 9, 2025 at 9:43 AM Great to see you. Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "Sea of Roses" write. It was fun to bring my pretty roses to life. "A day goes better with pretty flowers." Have a blessed day with some flowers on your desk..........

Paige Hind February 8, 2025 at 5:27 PM Aw, this is cute! And sweet! I liked it. <3 Paula Goldsmith February 9, 2025 at 9:41 AM Great to see you. Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Sea of Roses" write to be, cute And sweet. It was fun to write. "A day goes better with pretty flowers." Have a blessed day with some flowers on your desk...........

Hilda Greenhough February 8, 2025 at 12:53 PM This is a beauty with an itch at the end. I love how you include nature's pesky moments along with its beauty. Your poem encompasses that garden that makes us sneeze. Good job. Paula Goldsmith February 9, 2025 at 9:40 AM Great to see you. Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Sea of Roses" write to be a, Good job. "A day goes better with pretty flowers." Have a blessed day with some flowers on your desk...........

Shadow Hamilton February 8, 2025 at 9:51 AM I adore roses Paula I have several in my garden their perfume surrounds one as you wander about the beds great poem hugs Shadow Paula Goldsmith February 8, 2025 at 10:56 AM Great to see you. Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "Sea of Roses" write. I love pink roses the best. You are so blessed to have a rose garden. "A day goes better with pretty flowers." Have a blessed day with some flowers on your desk...........

John Read February 8, 2025 at 5:22 AM Hi Paula I know how flowers brighten a ladies day, enjoyed reading your poem God bless. xx Paula Goldsmith February 8, 2025 at 8:52 AM Great to see you. Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "Sea of Roses" write. Pretty flowers can brighten up any day. Hooray!!! "A day goes better with pretty flowers." Have a blessed day with some flowers on your desk...........

Beryl Edmonds February 7, 2025 at 3:59 PM Love your sea of roses poem Paula, beautiful… Beryl x Paula Goldsmith February 8, 2025 at 8:49 AM Great to see you. Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Sea of Roses" write to be, beautiful. Roses are a pretty flower and I love pink ones the best. "A day goes better with pretty flowers." Have a blessed day with some flowers on your desk...........

David Fisher February 7, 2025 at 3:55 PM What a nice descriptive poem; the thought of a sea of roses, too, is amazing. Paula Goldsmith February 8, 2025 at 8:47 AM Great to see you. Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "Sea of Roses" write. I have seen beautiful fields of flowers but never roses. "A day goes better with pretty flowers." Have a blessed day with some flowers on your desk...........

Sara Kendrick February 7, 2025 at 1:30 PM Roses do have a wonderful scent to release for us to enjoy. Thank you for sharing. Sara K Paula Goldsmith February 8, 2025 at 8:43 AM Great to see you. Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "Sea of Roses" write. "A day goes better with pretty flowers." Have a blessed day with some flowers on your desk...........

Oliver Mckeithan February 7, 2025 at 1:15 PM Well said Paula, I can see and smell them, even though it is winter. Good luck in the contest. This is a good one Paula Goldsmith February 8, 2025 at 8:42 AM Great to see you. Thanks for reading/writing and for your Good luck in the contest.. Glad you enjoyed my "Sea of Roses" write. It is great you can see and smell my pretty roses. "A day goes better with pretty flowers." Have a blessed day with some flowers on your desk...........

Anne-Lise Andresen February 7, 2025 at 12:14 PM - You describe the joy of roses ... while I describe the sadness of roses ... roses can mean so much, Paula :) - You deserve many roses ... until your nose sneezes :))) ... a lovely poem :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs Paula Goldsmith February 7, 2025 at 12:38 PM Great to see you. Thanks for reading/writing and for your Best wishes in the contest. Glad you found my "Sea of Roses" write to be, a lovely poem. You are so right when you say, "roses can mean so much" and they do. "A day goes better with pretty flowers." Have a blessed day with some flowers on your desk...........

Paula Goldsmith February 7, 2025 at 10:56 AM Sea of Roses~Date Written: 2/7/2025 "Written By Human Poet"