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Making Love Poetry Contest Sponsored by Kai Michael Neumann Edited and submitted...6 Dec 2024
Your eyes a dark archipelago Mysterious then exotic drifting across my shore; I perceive their warmth inviting While those lips blow a tangy flavour- Irresistible, poised to reach for a kiss Brewed by the kiln of summer’s ember… Carefully, my logic examines the prospects Between reason and wantonness, As the fluid air spins amorously And the evening grows too blind, naked-- The waves within my navel dilate, fluid as current's unknown motion... I forget what happens next except, I was Drunk with the body- rhythm of something untenably spontaneous; Coasting on a body outside a bend ebbing flowing through a belly and tendon Of a conniving sea.

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Date: 12/21/2024 5:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 12/17/2024 12:00:00 PM
Congratulations Nette. This is a splendid poem of passion seeking to guide you in your decision
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Date: 12/17/2024 9:23:00 AM
Wow! Faveing this! I've never read a more apt description on the secret clock work of a woman's response to love making. Brilliant!! Xoxo
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Date: 12/17/2024 6:57:00 AM
Nette, sounds like love indeed! I particularly like the part about application of logic, which doesn't always go as planned. We are funny creatures and you capture that all so well. You also write with a very positive tone, which I admire. Smiles...we're all having so much fun here!!
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Date: 12/14/2024 3:06:00 PM
Gorgeous....really very much so....
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Date: 12/9/2024 3:10:00 PM
Hello Nette, so very romantic. A lot of passion. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Date: 12/8/2024 10:11:00 AM
I love how your poem is an evocative exploration of the tension between logic and desire. Through lush imagery and metaphors like the "dark archipelago" and "waves within my navel," the speaker captures the intoxicating and uncontrollable nature of attraction.
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Date: 12/8/2024 9:46:00 AM
Me too, I enjoyed a lot reading this gorgeous and romantic poem of yours dear poet friend and sis Nette. Thank you so much for sharing. My best wishes always. God bless you always and your poetry/writings. Hugs
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Date: 12/8/2024 9:11:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write.  "Good Luck" Have a great/blessed day writing away...............
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Date: 12/8/2024 1:23:00 AM
Your verse is full of passion and romance Nette. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom
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