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Sea of Leaves

child’s reaction blow by blow swirling twirling vertigo rosy leapers letting go roars Calypso overflow 10/21/2020 Contest: Rithimus Divisa 10 Sponsor: Gregory Barden Original Name: OVERFLOW

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Date: 10/25/2020 7:28:00 PM
I still love leaf piles! :) Your imagery is vivid and playful and fantastic, Kim! Congratulations for your wonderful win.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/25/2020 2:34:00 PM
Delightful and fun image of children playing in the piles of autumn's leaves. Big congrats on your win with Greg! ~ John
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/25/2020 3:18:00 PM
Thank you! :)
Date: 10/25/2020 11:10:00 AM
Falling leaves as a Calypso dance - what a brilliant image, Kim. Congratulations on your win with this creative picture of autumn!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/25/2020 3:18:00 PM
Thank you, Sam!
Date: 10/25/2020 8:31:00 AM
I liked this the first time I read it Kim. :) Congratulations on your win! Linda
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/25/2020 3:17:00 PM
Thank you, Linda!
Date: 10/23/2020 4:24:00 PM
Ah, so well done; it looks like leaf piles!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2020 7:01:00 PM
Thank you! Jumping....ahhh
Date: 10/21/2020 8:37:00 AM
Great vision and perfect extract for the contest. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2020 7:01:00 PM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 10/21/2020 8:31:00 AM
Wow. Great one Kim. I remember jumping in leaf piles as a child :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2020 7:00:00 PM
So much fun! Thank you!
Date: 10/21/2020 7:53:00 AM
Can just picture the image Kim, kids have a fascination for them as do us poets. Good luck. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2020 8:08:00 AM
Yes, we do! God’s amazing!

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