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Sea of Leaves

               child’s reaction blow by blow
           swirling        twirling         vertigo 
     rosy         leapers           letting         go 
           roars            Calypso        overflow

10/21/2020
Contest: Rithimus Divisa 10
Sponsor: Gregory Barden
Original Name: OVERFLOW

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2020

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Susan Ashley Date: 10/25/2020 7:28:00 PM I still love leaf piles! :) Your imagery is vivid and playful and fantastic, Kim! Congratulations for your wonderful win.. ~Susan Login to Reply

John Watt Date: 10/25/2020 2:34:00 PM Delightful and fun image of children playing in the piles of autumn's leaves. Big congrats on your win with Greg! ~ John Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/25/2020 3:18:00 PM Thank you! :)

Sam Kauffman Date: 10/25/2020 11:10:00 AM Falling leaves as a Calypso dance - what a brilliant image, Kim. Congratulations on your win with this creative picture of autumn! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/25/2020 3:18:00 PM Thank you, Sam!

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 10/25/2020 8:31:00 AM I liked this the first time I read it Kim. :) Congratulations on your win! Linda Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/25/2020 3:17:00 PM Thank you, Linda!

Caren Krutsinger Date: 10/23/2020 4:24:00 PM Ah, so well done; it looks like leaf piles! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/23/2020 7:01:00 PM Thank you! Jumping....ahhh

Victor Buhagiar Date: 10/21/2020 8:37:00 AM Great vision and perfect extract for the contest. ~~ Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/23/2020 7:01:00 PM Thank you, Victor!

Heidi Sands Date: 10/21/2020 8:31:00 AM Wow. Great one Kim. I remember jumping in leaf piles as a child :) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/23/2020 7:00:00 PM So much fun! Thank you!

Tom Cunningham Date: 10/21/2020 7:53:00 AM Can just picture the image Kim, kids have a fascination for them as do us poets. Good luck. Tom Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/21/2020 8:08:00 AM Yes, we do! God’s amazing!