Kim Rodrigues Poet Rhyme

Sea of Leaves

               child’s reaction blow by blow
           swirling        twirling         vertigo 
     rosy         leapers           letting         go 
           roars            Calypso        overflow

10/21/2020
Contest: Rithimus Divisa 10
Sponsor: Gregory Barden
Original Name: OVERFLOW

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Susan Ashley October 25, 2020 at 7:28 PM I still love leaf piles! :) Your imagery is vivid and playful and fantastic, Kim! Congratulations for your wonderful win.. ~Susan

John Watt October 25, 2020 at 2:34 PM Delightful and fun image of children playing in the piles of autumn's leaves. Big congrats on your win with Greg! ~ John Kim Rodrigues October 25, 2020 at 3:18 PM Thank you! :)

Sam Kauffman October 25, 2020 at 11:10 AM Falling leaves as a Calypso dance - what a brilliant image, Kim. Congratulations on your win with this creative picture of autumn! Kim Rodrigues October 25, 2020 at 3:18 PM Thank you, Sam!

Linda Alice Fowler October 25, 2020 at 8:31 AM I liked this the first time I read it Kim. :) Congratulations on your win! Linda Kim Rodrigues October 25, 2020 at 3:17 PM Thank you, Linda!

Caren Krutsinger October 23, 2020 at 4:24 PM Ah, so well done; it looks like leaf piles! Kim Rodrigues October 23, 2020 at 7:01 PM Thank you! Jumping....ahhh

Victor Buhagiar October 21, 2020 at 8:37 AM Great vision and perfect extract for the contest. ~~ Kim Rodrigues October 23, 2020 at 7:01 PM Thank you, Victor!

Heidi Sands October 21, 2020 at 8:31 AM Wow. Great one Kim. I remember jumping in leaf piles as a child :) Kim Rodrigues October 23, 2020 at 7:00 PM So much fun! Thank you!

Tom Cunningham October 21, 2020 at 7:53 AM Can just picture the image Kim, kids have a fascination for them as do us poets. Good luck. Tom Kim Rodrigues October 21, 2020 at 8:08 AM Yes, we do! God’s amazing!