Sea Mist Collecting

sea mist collecting

creeps among rocky tide pools…

the sea never sleeps


for what my eyes see contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 11:03 AM
Congratulations Charles, on your well deserved win in the contest " What My Eyes See" sponsored by Annalise Brigham. Love, Carol
Ruebel Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 9:38 AM
Hello Charles, Wow, this is just wonderful! love it Congratulations on your win As Always, Shar
Freeman Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 4:14 PM
Great job Charles, great to see you in the top ten! Congratulations on your worthy poems 7th place honored win! Agape, Moses
Kendrick Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 4:01 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Taylor Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 1:02 PM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Charles. Nice going. Ralph
Poet Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 11:46 AM
Excellent Haiku here!Congrats Charles on your win in this contest---kashinath
K. Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 8:34 AM
I love your last line for this Charles :) Congrats on your win for this vivid haiku :)
Sweetheart Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 7:36 AM
Congrats Charles on your wonderful win in the Haiku contest with another fabulous write my friend.. enjoy your top ten victory with luv..
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 11:29 PM
Charles. this is really good. Among the most haiku sounding on the list. congratulations.
Johnson Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 9:58 PM
Very observant Charles. Great work and great win. Love, Joyce
Haick Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 8:56 PM
Congratulations on your 7th Place win in my contest, Charles. Thanks for the support. Annalise
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 11:43 PM
I like the way you did yours, Charles. I hope it does well in the contest.
Gorelick Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 5:26 PM
I never get tired of poems about the sea..I enjoyed your write and Ill bet its on the winners list. BG
Kendrick Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 4:01 PM
Good luck in the contest with this creative work..Reads like a winner..Sara
Song Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 3:25 PM
Written like a Haiku Master! (Similar to a Kung Fu Master!lol! Your haiku conjures a relaxing vision in my mind's eye. Thanks for help with my cricket. We are "rearranging." Gwendolen
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