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Written 08/July/2024

Sea Glass poetry contest

 

nestled in the depth of the crystal sands, a broken piece slanted up towards the sky, dark green and several inches long it stood, reflecting the setting Sun into passing eyes, the lower end of a broken bottle upside down, half filled by washed in sand from the blue sea, was perhaps sent with a message that bore love, that piece of paper since then has been lost, the one who wrote that letter has waited and left, and sleeps now in someone else’s arms, that letter was never read nor was it seen, such is the story of some lost love in life, hearts wait and leave, while bottles remain, I picked the bottle up and took it home with me, it rests on my table- that brave love messenger from sea!

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Date: 7/10/2024 9:28:00 PM
You must open it and see, Krish. A love letter meant for you to read. Love the tale of what could have been! B0l
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/10/2024 11:27:00 PM
Thanks Anaya! :)
Date: 7/8/2024 4:20:00 PM
poignant to say the least, krish...you took this artword to great heights!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/8/2024 10:12:00 PM
Thanks Nette! Thanks for reading and for your lovely words!
Date: 7/8/2024 2:26:00 PM
Hi Krish…..what lovely intriguing poem….l have never thought of sea glass as being a bottle harbouring a love letter that had been lost! Enjoyed ….Debx
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/8/2024 10:11:00 PM
Thanks Deb! Such a nice thing to say! Much appreciated!
Date: 7/8/2024 12:44:00 PM
Your "Sea Glass" is a lovely write/story. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a blessed day writing away............
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/8/2024 12:46:00 PM
Thanks Paula! Did not realise a piece of glass could evoke such sentiments! :)

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