Sea Crest - Ocean-Ku

Blue zest of sea spray Gull hovers the ocean's crest Punctuation mark! Suzanne Delaney

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Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/25/2013 10:51:00 PM

Wow. Many congrats for this win Suz.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/24/2013 8:04:00 PM

Suzanne, a nice winning Ku' poem... Congratulations in Heather's lovely haiku contest. xox~ Linda

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/23/2013 3:42:00 PM

So happy to see this on the winner's list Suz. Congrats on your win!

Donna Jones

Date: 4/23/2013 1:28:00 PM

Congratulations on your win...

Therese Bacha

Date: 4/23/2013 8:57:00 AM

Congratulation, love it, you are amazing in all your poems. Love Terry

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 4/20/2013 12:20:00 AM

nice one... best wishes in the contest :)

Skat A

Date: 4/19/2013 8:09:00 PM

Suzanne Delaney, a like the blue zesty spray. I can't stand them gull's. but, how I love your haiku. Good luck in the contest. ~*~SKAT

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 4/13/2013 3:32:00 PM

Dear POETESS,Spirit Nurse,SuZ, good luck in the contest. How many kinds of ku's are there?? Are The Japanese Haiku Master smiling at all these ku contest? a polite way of dishonor? I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Spirit Patient, Poet,Liege...Harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2013 7:17:00 AM

this is SO CLEVER!!! I this this ocean haiku contest is inspiring a really great crop of kus.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/12/2013 9:39:00 PM

Suzanne, love the ocaen-ku... good luck in the contest...Linda