Se Vita Privare

Heated words singe my ear
Moments since you fled me
No force tethers you here
Love proves no longer free

Looping with rage broiling
How do I let you go?
Clutching trust that's spoiling
Expelled from all I know

How'd I fail to take heed?
Prayers of faith long to flee
Dashed once again by deed
Does hope abandon me?

Withered pride lashes out
Fists of spite conjure fright
While I flop like a trout
Gasping beneath my plight

Tear through the whole damn house
Surging terror inside
Where's my generous spouse?
Was she compelled to hide?

The mirror plays my dread
As my liar eyes dance
Villains play in my head
I don't deserve a chance

Quite beyond that notion
I wish to snuff my light
Morpheus send potion
Asphyxiate this blight

As I quake on the floor
My digits make a choice
They dig deep in that drawer
Will they silence my voice...?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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October 1, 2009 at 3:02 PM
John, just wanted to stop by and add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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September 25, 2009 at 6:33 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week. A. W. http://www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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September 25, 2009 at 3:57 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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September 24, 2009 at 3:21 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals John. Love, Carol
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September 24, 2009 at 2:57 PM
Nice use of rhyme to convey your thoughts in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen
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September 24, 2009 at 1:41 PM
Hi John, Congratulations on getting through the first round of the poetry contest with your great verse! Luck and love, Carolyn
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September 24, 2009 at 1:04 PM
John, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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September 24, 2009 at 9:22 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week John. Love, Carol
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September 24, 2009 at 9:08 AM
Congratulations! John on your well deserved feature of the week. Love and Light, Lainie.
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November 28, 2008 at 5:27 AM
Clever Latin quote for your title; a phrase connoting suicide... again, excellent cadence and rhyming and singular expression... Well done my friend! Best wishes, Keith (...your pieces deserve a broader recognition.)
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