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Heart with a keener marigold edge. Using a crimson mulberry shade. Trilling is as regal as a raven crown. Embedded in the sky of a striking color. Scarlet grape drips on closed lips. Luscious, but ultimately fatal Morish odors as tightening of chains Indentured by my present self Star-stained soul, guilty of fierce love The success of delicious vengeance Flimsy lilac paper flowers from losing bliss Produce evil things on my grave To recapture this era When I pledge faith, there is a spare chance Holy fumes that rose vanished in the trial In the zero-gravity zone of outer distress.
Written: November 22, 2022

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Date: 11/23/2022 8:44:00 PM
The beautiful words of this verse create striking mental images, Lasaad. I enjoyed the star studded journey. Evelyn
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Date: 11/22/2022 2:13:00 PM
Amazing to wander in your poetic journey my friend. Exploring the unknown on the wings of imagination.
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Date: 11/22/2022 2:07:00 PM
Bewildering yet beautifully crafted poetry Lasaad, I so enjoy attempting to decipher your works, the universe is spiritual in it’s very own right, and you’re caught up right in the middle of it’s majesty, cheers David
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