Script of Mother Nature

Monsoon season is sneaking out into our weather.
Birds and insects are rushing to their bower.
But Suddenly,
Breezing trees heard the whispers of leaves and said:
Everyone come along for the shower
Let's dance together amidst the flower 
and devour Nature's power,
whilst these tiny droplets descend the river. 
All had lots of fun with pleasure.

18-4-2020

~DEEPA~

Second place in Silent One's contest.:-)

Note:The line "Breezing trees heard the whispers of 
           leaves" is from the poem, The last goodbye
           by Vijay Pandit.
Theme-*Poetic Lines From A Poetry Soup Poet
 - Vijay Pandit Poetry Contest*
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 5/3/2020 11:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Silent One's contest. V., great use of Vijay s one line. Hugs Eve
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V. Deepa
Date: 5/3/2020 1:24:00 PM
Thankyou very much Ma'am. It cheers me a lot when great poets are reading my piece and appreciating me willfully.Take care
Date: 5/3/2020 6:09:00 AM
Great take on the contest.. Congratulations on your place in the contest..
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V. Deepa
Date: 5/3/2020 8:09:00 AM
Thanks a bunch for placing my poem sir. I'm glad you liked it. Your support in this is heartily appreciated. It's admirable to encourage & inspire poetic minds by organising contests.Wish you best of luck for whatever your doing..!
Date: 4/18/2020 2:54:00 PM
Lovely piece V, my best to you in the contest! xomo
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V. Deepa
Date: 4/19/2020 11:28:00 AM
Thankyou so much Ma'am. Suggestions are also accepted with love.
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