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Screwed Up

You had it all And screwed up bad Your life took you On a downward spiral Out of control Where no one could relate Your demons are your own Who could ever imagine You had a chance at love And screwed up bad You sabotaged it Never believing you’re deserving One staggering victim left behind Broken down on one knee You screwed up bad AP: 2nd place 2020 Posted March 4, 2019

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Date: 3/6/2019 9:50:00 PM
My one and only grammatical question regarding this powerful poem: 'Who is YOU?' (LOL, but it's actually serious). ~ gw
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Date: 3/6/2019 10:05:00 PM
Thankfully it's not me or my husband. The rest of the adults can take care of themselves...
Date: 3/5/2019 12:26:00 PM
I love strong poem.
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Date: 3/5/2019 12:28:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Anisha.
Date: 3/5/2019 3:44:00 AM
Powerful write, Line.
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Date: 3/5/2019 8:33:00 AM
Thanks for the compliment, Caren.

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