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“The known always changes; knowing never changes.” ? BY Rupert Spira
A super brown and fluttery bird greets me. Tap at my window and ask, "Didn't you see?" It chimes, drawing my insight into a refrain. My flesh is older, as the bird flies, drowning my brain.   No fear; free your brain; graze on life—you'll see! Slip out of jail, for the gate is ajar, and no key? Avoid fear and relish the lull—realness is love. Join life's rising stars to view Earth from above. When you face random bliss, do not vacillate. Yield in—many lives and towns are desolate. Not savvy or ardent, yet a few traits are eternal. Life is still full of hope; Its tilts aren't infernal. Electing grace over excess is legit mastery. Oh, adjusting—not merely trend—is the key. Talk humbly, cherish zeal, and avoid panic. Life symphony of screen awareness is magic. Our inner and outer personas are disparity.  I closely track everything that tempts me. Be the light, and see me from afar with pride. Until I wear my awareness screen to glide, Put on a gentle, steady, ever-clinging gaze. Our blunders are endless in a love maze. A tide grabs riches and exits with a stare. Awareness prompts us to love, not scare. Written: May 6th, 2023 Screen of Awareness Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 5/27/2023 7:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win, Lasaad, for your lovely poem!
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Date: 5/27/2023 6:59:00 AM
"Avoid fear and relish the lull—realness is love. Join life's rising stars to view Earth from above" - immense optimism is beautifully expressed. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/26/2023 8:43:00 PM
Lasaad, you have written line after memorable line - electing grace over excess. Wonderful wisdom dear friend. Your word choice is marvelous and moves everything along with grace. Congratulations on your win! So happy to see this on the winners list and to share the podium with such a marvelously crafted poem. Blessings dear friend!
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Date: 5/7/2023 4:43:00 AM
Much enlightenment you convey my friend. Life lessons woven in your poem throughout. I like your quote at the top. Best to you, Lasaad.
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Date: 5/7/2023 3:58:00 AM
...wowza man.....nice write......"...i wear my awareness screen to glide...".....bird feeders and camera be a good passion... .....stan
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Date: 5/7/2023 2:59:00 AM
Some very interesting points made in this contest entry. We do stumble and fall many times in life, but it is how we get up and keep going that makes us stronger. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for visiting my page. Sara
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