Screams and Shoutouts

Swings and roundabouts Screams and shout-outs Brought us together Whatever the weather Preschool drawings reminiscent Heart shape cards always consistent Childhood plays you Juliette Romeo stands wishing duet High school dances Proms first romances First nervous kisses With occasional misses Dates and fun with everyone Young adult lives lived and sung Words of love always spoken Childhood vows said never broken Life... choices collage Careers higher knowledge Work and play Hoping some day To see you somewhere... Low and behold you where there Me with mine You in kind On swings and roundabouts I did loudly shout Your scream cried And love never died
2-3-19
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Agustin Avatar
May 10, 2024 at 11:58 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Gauthier Avatar
February 11, 2021 at 1:12 PM
A pleasure to find your delightful poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Ronald ~
Kent Avatar
February 12, 2021 at 7:40 PM
Wow! Line, thank you for commenting. I do not write often and was delightfully surprized that they published one of my poems. I did one in high school that made the yearbook but the future for me was construction. But... every once in a while (or once upon a time) I get the urge to write something down. Your comment means a lot thank you.
Dietrich Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 5:55 PM
wonderful reminiscing, Ronald.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 6:29 AM
Ronald, this poem has a wonderful tone that made me smile and want to dance a tiny bit!
Onclaud Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 1:45 PM
ohh, i'm truly taken by this splendid write... fine congrats, ronald!...huggs
Andresen Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 3:28 AM
- Ronald, congratulations on your great winning poem ... writing about tears is a sensitive theme :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 8:30 PM
Joyous! Congrats on your win!
Devonshire Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 2:39 PM
Now this is excellently-penned free verse, Ronald. I like the short lines, Some free verse seems more like sentences strung together, but yours has that poetic feel and this poem is packed with wonderful images and emotion. Congratulations on your first place! Best wishes, Carolyn
One Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 1:02 PM
Loved this poem and the journey you take the reader... Nice to see you did a positive poem, not the most emotive, but so well expressed.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Dietrich Avatar
February 4, 2019 at 5:10 PM
this one holds such glee and excitement!! I enjoyed this poem and thanks for your kind comment at my poem
Leach Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 6:54 PM
Well done, Ronald.
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