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Scrambled Heart

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2021 4:31:00 PM

Back at this one and I am still scrambled hahaha!!

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/12/2020 1:08:00 PM

I mean ... I've seen people think "outside the box" but this is next level. I'm not even sure how I'm supposed to read this (that's how scrambled you got me!). The music accompaniment was a nice touch ... they play off each other.

Quoth Theraven
Date: 5/15/2020 10:49:00 PM

Hello Timothy, There are at least two different single sentences. My favorite is 2 3 3 9 2 8 5 3 4 2 -Richard

Eve Roper

Date: 3/22/2020 2:53:00 PM

Great concrete poem; I love the music you picked. My Fav.Thank you for reading my "Batter UP" poem, she is now knocking them over the fence. :) grandchildren or our 2nd children, but they get to go home

Quoth Theraven
Date: 4/12/2020 6:58:00 PM

Eve, Sometimes,,I wish we could go home too. -Richard

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/18/2020 11:05:00 PM

Great poem, Richard. Loved it! :)

Quoth Theraven
Date: 4/12/2020 6:57:00 PM

Hi Evelyn. Thanks, know what it says? No one has ever ventured a guess. -Richard

Ann Foster

Date: 1/19/2020 8:25:00 PM

You are on a roll. Keep at it. I am loving every one ... Ann

Quoth Theraven
Date: 2/19/2020 10:08:00 PM

Ann, Thank you for the comment. I like rolls. -Richard

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/15/2020 6:21:00 AM

Clever pen! Very original!

Quoth Theraven
Date: 2/16/2020 12:43:00 PM

M.L., Thank you for that comment. What do you think it says? -Richard

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/4/2020 8:43:00 AM

Cool!

Quoth Theraven
Date: 1/5/2020 4:46:00 PM

Happy Sunday Richard, Thanks for that cool comment. -Richard

Brenda Chiri

Date: 1/3/2020 1:18:00 PM

Wow Richard I love this!;)

Quoth Theraven
Date: 1/3/2020 9:48:00 PM

Brenda, Thanks for that comment. Happy New Year. -Richard

Hello There

Date: 1/1/2020 9:46:00 PM

Love the musical accompaniment to this neat piece. Happy New Year, Richard!!

Quoth Theraven
Date: 1/3/2020 9:29:00 PM

Hello Hello, Here it is a brand new year never tired of saying that. Thank you for the comment, Happy New Year. Perhaps someone will let us know more about the music(?) -Richard

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/1/2020 2:33:00 PM

This is an artistic-musical coup-de-grace to close the year, Richard. Superb! Thank you, and l will listen again and again! I've heard/seen the composition performed live; it's brilliant!... Your whole production is a FAVE for me! Thank you! ~ Gershon

Quoth Theraven
Date: 1/3/2020 9:26:00 PM

Gershon, Thank you for that wonderful end of the decade comment too. I'm a little embarrassed to admit I don't know this music. It just seemed to fit with my poem's message. -Richard

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/31/2019 2:35:00 PM

- Creative and great, Richard :) - I wish you a peaceful and wonderful New Year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Quoth Theraven
Date: 1/3/2020 9:21:00 PM

Happy New Year Anne-Lise. Thank you for the comment. The year went so fast. -Richard

Juliet Ligon

Date: 12/31/2019 12:55:00 PM

The music is an nice compliment to this artful poem.

Quoth Theraven
Date: 1/3/2020 9:19:00 PM

Juliet, Quel joli commentaire ma chère., merci beaucoup. -Richard

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/30/2019 5:50:00 PM

Hmmm sounds to me like this involves a woman!!! My clue was that last word. Super creative!

Quoth Theraven
Date: 12/30/2019 8:43:00 PM

Andrea, Thank you for stopping by on this glorious Monday. From Marc Antony & Cleopatra to Kermit & Miss Piggy. I've come to realize that the best riddles always include women. -Richard

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/30/2019 4:26:00 PM

Wow, very creative, Richard! Love the music you chose too. Hugs, Carolyn

Quoth Theraven
Date: 12/30/2019 8:36:00 PM

Carolyn, Thank you for the comment. The music.,not too incongruous for such a mixed up poem? -Richard

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/30/2019 12:23:00 PM

Witty and imaginative! A real Puzzle dear, Richard ! Happy New Year!

Quoth Theraven
Date: 12/30/2019 8:30:00 PM

Demetrios, Thank you for sharing these final waning year's days with me and the others, all brilliant points of light. -Richard

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/30/2019 8:23:00 AM

Imaginative, creative, scrambled and very clever Richard - Kudos - by the way, love scrabble, sitting down to a game right now! Blessings, Jennifer.

Quoth Theraven
Date: 12/30/2019 8:27:00 PM

Thank you for the comments Jennifer. I'm hoping for a triple word score..,someday. -Richard

Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/29/2019 2:57:00 AM

Very clever, Richard. Happy New Year Panagiota

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/2/2020 8:51:00 AM

Ii so thank you Richard! Panagiota

Quoth Theraven
Date: 12/29/2019 9:02:00 PM

Panagiota, Thanks for the comment. Very profound message in your poem 'TEARS ON MY STAR OF DAVID'. -Richard

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 12/28/2019 10:50:00 PM

Funny, I've never been good at Scrabble, but this was a fun one!

Quoth Theraven
Date: 12/28/2019 11:34:00 PM

Michelle, Thanks for stopping by, that is so true. Board games inspired many a challenging family. -Richard

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/27/2019 11:43:00 PM

I was looking at it thinking "scrabbled heart" not scrambled heart. But that works too. I do not do these; they are way too HARD for my brain to figure out. Nice one!

Quoth Theraven
Date: 12/28/2019 12:30:00 AM

Caren, Thank you for the comment. Don't you know that all so in love are scrambled? Left scrabbled in a triple word game. -Richard

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/27/2019 4:42:00 PM

I enjoyed your creative poem Richard! well done :)

Quoth Theraven
Date: 12/27/2019 5:54:00 PM

Heidi, Thank you for that. Let's ring in the New Year right. Though the past remains in our hearts. -Richard

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/27/2019 4:09:00 PM

Neat, Richard.

Quoth Theraven
Date: 12/27/2019 4:30:00 PM

Line, Thanks..,you're neat too. -Richard

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/27/2019 3:23:00 PM

very clever Richard... the mind can be scrambled when the mind is lost in love .. i love word games so now i wish i had one of my best friends around to play one with... :) hugs

Quoth Theraven
Date: 12/27/2019 4:26:00 PM

Sandra, Thanks for stopping by. Not really a Concrete though it started out that way. -Richard