Quoth Theraven Poet Concrete

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Scrambled Heart

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Andrea Dietrich January 15, 2021 at 4:31 PM Back at this one and I am still scrambled hahaha!!

Timothy Hicks May 12, 2020 at 1:08 PM I mean ... I've seen people think "outside the box" but this is next level. I'm not even sure how I'm supposed to read this (that's how scrambled you got me!). The music accompaniment was a nice touch ... they play off each other. Quoth Theraven May 15, 2020 at 10:49 PM Hello Timothy, There are at least two different single sentences. My favorite is 2 3 3 9 2 8 5 3 4 2 -Richard

Eve Roper March 22, 2020 at 2:53 PM Great concrete poem; I love the music you picked. My Fav.Thank you for reading my "Batter UP" poem, she is now knocking them over the fence. :) grandchildren or our 2nd children, but they get to go home Quoth Theraven April 12, 2020 at 6:58 PM Eve, Sometimes,,I wish we could go home too. -Richard

Evelyn Judy Buehler March 18, 2020 at 11:05 PM Great poem, Richard. Loved it! :) Quoth Theraven April 12, 2020 at 6:57 PM Hi Evelyn. Thanks, know what it says? No one has ever ventured a guess. -Richard

Ann Foster January 19, 2020 at 8:25 PM You are on a roll. Keep at it. I am loving every one ... Ann Quoth Theraven February 19, 2020 at 10:08 PM Ann, Thank you for the comment. I like rolls. -Richard

M. L. Kiser January 15, 2020 at 6:21 AM Clever pen! Very original! Quoth Theraven February 16, 2020 at 12:43 PM M.L., Thank you for that comment. What do you think it says? -Richard

Richard Lamoureux January 4, 2020 at 8:43 AM Cool! Quoth Theraven January 5, 2020 at 4:46 PM Happy Sunday Richard, Thanks for that cool comment. -Richard

Brenda Chiri January 3, 2020 at 1:18 PM Wow Richard I love this!;) Quoth Theraven January 3, 2020 at 9:48 PM Brenda, Thanks for that comment. Happy New Year. -Richard

Hello There January 1, 2020 at 9:46 PM Love the musical accompaniment to this neat piece. Happy New Year, Richard!! Quoth Theraven January 3, 2020 at 9:29 PM Hello Hello, Here it is a brand new year never tired of saying that. Thank you for the comment, Happy New Year. Perhaps someone will let us know more about the music(?) -Richard

Gershon Wolf January 1, 2020 at 2:33 PM This is an artistic-musical coup-de-grace to close the year, Richard. Superb! Thank you, and l will listen again and again! I've heard/seen the composition performed live; it's brilliant!... Your whole production is a FAVE for me! Thank you! ~ Gershon Quoth Theraven January 3, 2020 at 9:26 PM Gershon, Thank you for that wonderful end of the decade comment too. I'm a little embarrassed to admit I don't know this music. It just seemed to fit with my poem's message. -Richard

Anne-Lise Andresen December 31, 2019 at 2:35 PM - Creative and great, Richard :) - I wish you a peaceful and wonderful New Year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Quoth Theraven January 3, 2020 at 9:21 PM Happy New Year Anne-Lise. Thank you for the comment. The year went so fast. -Richard

Juliet Ligon December 31, 2019 at 12:55 PM The music is an nice compliment to this artful poem. Quoth Theraven January 3, 2020 at 9:19 PM Juliet, Quel joli commentaire ma chère., merci beaucoup. -Richard

Andrea Dietrich December 30, 2019 at 5:50 PM Hmmm sounds to me like this involves a woman!!! My clue was that last word. Super creative! Quoth Theraven December 30, 2019 at 8:43 PM Andrea, Thank you for stopping by on this glorious Monday. From Marc Antony & Cleopatra to Kermit & Miss Piggy. I've come to realize that the best riddles always include women. -Richard

Carolyn Devonshire December 30, 2019 at 4:26 PM Wow, very creative, Richard! Love the music you chose too. Hugs, Carolyn Quoth Theraven December 30, 2019 at 8:36 PM Carolyn, Thank you for the comment. The music.,not too incongruous for such a mixed up poem? -Richard

Demetrios Trifiatis December 30, 2019 at 12:23 PM Witty and imaginative! A real Puzzle dear, Richard ! Happy New Year! Quoth Theraven December 30, 2019 at 8:30 PM Demetrios, Thank you for sharing these final waning year's days with me and the others, all brilliant points of light. -Richard

Jennifer Proxenos December 30, 2019 at 8:23 AM Imaginative, creative, scrambled and very clever Richard - Kudos - by the way, love scrabble, sitting down to a game right now! Blessings, Jennifer. Quoth Theraven December 30, 2019 at 8:27 PM Thank you for the comments Jennifer. I'm hoping for a triple word score..,someday. -Richard

Panagiota Romios December 29, 2019 at 2:57 AM Very clever, Richard. Happy New Year Panagiota Panagiota Romios January 2, 2020 at 8:51 AM Ii so thank you Richard! Panagiota Quoth Theraven December 29, 2019 at 9:02 PM Panagiota, Thanks for the comment. Very profound message in your poem 'TEARS ON MY STAR OF DAVID'. -Richard

Michelle Faulkner December 28, 2019 at 10:50 PM Funny, I've never been good at Scrabble, but this was a fun one! Quoth Theraven December 28, 2019 at 11:34 PM Michelle, Thanks for stopping by, that is so true. Board games inspired many a challenging family. -Richard

Caren Krutsinger December 27, 2019 at 11:43 PM I was looking at it thinking "scrabbled heart" not scrambled heart. But that works too. I do not do these; they are way too HARD for my brain to figure out. Nice one! Quoth Theraven December 28, 2019 at 12:30 AM Caren, Thank you for the comment. Don't you know that all so in love are scrambled? Left scrabbled in a triple word game. -Richard

Heidi Sands December 27, 2019 at 4:42 PM I enjoyed your creative poem Richard! well done :) Quoth Theraven December 27, 2019 at 5:54 PM Heidi, Thank you for that. Let's ring in the New Year right. Though the past remains in our hearts. -Richard

Line Gauthier December 27, 2019 at 4:09 PM Neat, Richard. Quoth Theraven December 27, 2019 at 4:30 PM Line, Thanks..,you're neat too. -Richard

Sandra Adams December 27, 2019 at 3:23 PM very clever Richard... the mind can be scrambled when the mind is lost in love .. i love word games so now i wish i had one of my best friends around to play one with... :) hugs Quoth Theraven December 27, 2019 at 4:26 PM Sandra, Thanks for stopping by. Not really a Concrete though it started out that way. -Richard

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 27, 2019 at 1:54 PM Ooh, my brain enjoyed that. Great work! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 27, 2019 at 4:02 PM Oddly enough... Didn't catch the OD, ods are like that ;), Quoth Theraven December 27, 2019 at 2:18 PM Oh you Maureen...That means so much to me coming from you. Thank you, thank you, thank you. The 'OD' has no part in it. -Richard

Silent One December 27, 2019 at 1:29 PM Damn...I see it is all muddled up lol Quoth Theraven December 27, 2019 at 1:40 PM Silent One, Thanks for that, Concretes are not easy to create on PS. Note: All legal Scrabble words including 'OD'. -R