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Scrambled Heart

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/15/2021 4:31:00 PM Back at this one and I am still scrambled hahaha!! Login to Reply

Timothy Hicks Date: 5/12/2020 1:08:00 PM I mean ... I've seen people think "outside the box" but this is next level. I'm not even sure how I'm supposed to read this (that's how scrambled you got me!). The music accompaniment was a nice touch ... they play off each other. Login to Reply Quoth Theraven Date: 5/15/2020 10:49:00 PM Hello Timothy, There are at least two different single sentences. My favorite is 2 3 3 9 2 8 5 3 4 2 -Richard

Eve Roper Date: 3/22/2020 2:53:00 PM Great concrete poem; I love the music you picked. My Fav.Thank you for reading my "Batter UP" poem, she is now knocking them over the fence. :) grandchildren or our 2nd children, but they get to go home Login to Reply Quoth Theraven Date: 4/12/2020 6:58:00 PM Eve, Sometimes,,I wish we could go home too. -Richard

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 3/18/2020 11:05:00 PM Great poem, Richard. Loved it! :) Login to Reply Quoth Theraven Date: 4/12/2020 6:57:00 PM Hi Evelyn. Thanks, know what it says? No one has ever ventured a guess. -Richard

Ann Foster Date: 1/19/2020 8:25:00 PM You are on a roll. Keep at it. I am loving every one ... Ann Login to Reply Quoth Theraven Date: 2/19/2020 10:08:00 PM Ann, Thank you for the comment. I like rolls. -Richard

M. L. Kiser Date: 1/15/2020 6:21:00 AM Clever pen! Very original! Login to Reply Quoth Theraven Date: 2/16/2020 12:43:00 PM M.L., Thank you for that comment. What do you think it says? -Richard

Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/4/2020 8:43:00 AM Cool! Login to Reply Quoth Theraven Date: 1/5/2020 4:46:00 PM Happy Sunday Richard, Thanks for that cool comment. -Richard

Brenda Chiri Date: 1/3/2020 1:18:00 PM Wow Richard I love this!;) Login to Reply Quoth Theraven Date: 1/3/2020 9:48:00 PM Brenda, Thanks for that comment. Happy New Year. -Richard

Hello There Date: 1/1/2020 9:46:00 PM Love the musical accompaniment to this neat piece. Happy New Year, Richard!! Login to Reply Quoth Theraven Date: 1/3/2020 9:29:00 PM Hello Hello, Here it is a brand new year never tired of saying that. Thank you for the comment, Happy New Year. Perhaps someone will let us know more about the music(?) -Richard

Gershon Wolf Date: 1/1/2020 2:33:00 PM This is an artistic-musical coup-de-grace to close the year, Richard. Superb! Thank you, and l will listen again and again! I've heard/seen the composition performed live; it's brilliant!... Your whole production is a FAVE for me! Thank you! ~ Gershon Login to Reply Quoth Theraven Date: 1/3/2020 9:26:00 PM Gershon, Thank you for that wonderful end of the decade comment too. I'm a little embarrassed to admit I don't know this music. It just seemed to fit with my poem's message. -Richard

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/31/2019 2:35:00 PM - Creative and great, Richard :) - I wish you a peaceful and wonderful New Year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Quoth Theraven Date: 1/3/2020 9:21:00 PM Happy New Year Anne-Lise. Thank you for the comment. The year went so fast. -Richard

Juliet Ligon Date: 12/31/2019 12:55:00 PM The music is an nice compliment to this artful poem. Login to Reply Quoth Theraven Date: 1/3/2020 9:19:00 PM Juliet, Quel joli commentaire ma chère., merci beaucoup. -Richard

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/30/2019 5:50:00 PM Hmmm sounds to me like this involves a woman!!! My clue was that last word. Super creative! Login to Reply Quoth Theraven Date: 12/30/2019 8:43:00 PM Andrea, Thank you for stopping by on this glorious Monday. From Marc Antony & Cleopatra to Kermit & Miss Piggy. I've come to realize that the best riddles always include women. -Richard

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 12/30/2019 4:26:00 PM Wow, very creative, Richard! Love the music you chose too. Hugs, Carolyn Login to Reply Quoth Theraven Date: 12/30/2019 8:36:00 PM Carolyn, Thank you for the comment. The music.,not too incongruous for such a mixed up poem? -Richard

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 12/30/2019 12:23:00 PM Witty and imaginative! A real Puzzle dear, Richard ! Happy New Year! Login to Reply Quoth Theraven Date: 12/30/2019 8:30:00 PM Demetrios, Thank you for sharing these final waning year's days with me and the others, all brilliant points of light. -Richard

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 12/30/2019 8:23:00 AM Imaginative, creative, scrambled and very clever Richard - Kudos - by the way, love scrabble, sitting down to a game right now! Blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply Quoth Theraven Date: 12/30/2019 8:27:00 PM Thank you for the comments Jennifer. I'm hoping for a triple word score..,someday. -Richard

Panagiota Romios Date: 12/29/2019 2:57:00 AM Very clever, Richard. Happy New Year Panagiota Login to Reply Panagiota Romios Date: 1/2/2020 8:51:00 AM Ii so thank you Richard! Panagiota Quoth Theraven Date: 12/29/2019 9:02:00 PM Panagiota, Thanks for the comment. Very profound message in your poem 'TEARS ON MY STAR OF DAVID'. -Richard

Michelle Faulkner Date: 12/28/2019 10:50:00 PM Funny, I've never been good at Scrabble, but this was a fun one! Login to Reply Quoth Theraven Date: 12/28/2019 11:34:00 PM Michelle, Thanks for stopping by, that is so true. Board games inspired many a challenging family. -Richard

Caren Krutsinger Date: 12/27/2019 11:43:00 PM I was looking at it thinking "scrabbled heart" not scrambled heart. But that works too. I do not do these; they are way too HARD for my brain to figure out. Nice one! Login to Reply Quoth Theraven Date: 12/28/2019 12:30:00 AM Caren, Thank you for the comment. Don't you know that all so in love are scrambled? Left scrabbled in a triple word game. -Richard

Heidi Sands Date: 12/27/2019 4:42:00 PM I enjoyed your creative poem Richard! well done :) Login to Reply Quoth Theraven Date: 12/27/2019 5:54:00 PM Heidi, Thank you for that. Let's ring in the New Year right. Though the past remains in our hearts. -Richard

Line Gauthier Date: 12/27/2019 4:09:00 PM Neat, Richard. Login to Reply Quoth Theraven Date: 12/27/2019 4:30:00 PM Line, Thanks..,you're neat too. -Richard

Sandra Adams Date: 12/27/2019 3:23:00 PM very clever Richard... the mind can be scrambled when the mind is lost in love .. i love word games so now i wish i had one of my best friends around to play one with... :) hugs Login to Reply Quoth Theraven Date: 12/27/2019 4:26:00 PM Sandra, Thanks for stopping by. Not really a Concrete though it started out that way. -Richard

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 12/27/2019 1:54:00 PM Ooh, my brain enjoyed that. Great work! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 12/27/2019 4:02:00 PM Oddly enough... Didn't catch the OD, ods are like that ;), Quoth Theraven Date: 12/27/2019 2:18:00 PM Oh you Maureen...That means so much to me coming from you. Thank you, thank you, thank you. The 'OD' has no part in it. -Richard

Silent One Date: 12/27/2019 1:29:00 PM Damn...I see it is all muddled up lol Login to Reply Quoth Theraven Date: 12/27/2019 1:40:00 PM Silent One, Thanks for that, Concretes are not easy to create on PS. Note: All legal Scrabble words including 'OD'. -R