Scorpions Seminally Sting

Scorpions Seminally Sting


Jubilant skies once filled my eyes all upon the morning hue
Sweet caress gave me happiness upon the embrace of you

Sunshine spread with love ahead all amongst heavens view
A kiss divine taste like wine as the angels smiled in our debut

Moonlit beams in lovers dreams for hearts began their woo
Emotions rippled and desires tripled in lusts erupted spew

Then clouds of grey were there to stay as love began to skew
Our immortal bliss in the black abyss of Hyades special brew

Within evil eyes in just disguise I drank your elixir of voodoo
A scorpion sting a bridal ring and your poison dripping thru.




Sept.26.2018
Lines of ten that remind you
what it was like back then 
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Placed 1'st [#7]
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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White Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 1:09 PM
Lovely wedding vigil well done WW kelli
Gauthier Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 7:17 PM
Congrats on your win, WW. Beautifully done.
Nicole Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 7:20 PM
Congratulations my Warrior with Wings, on this win!! :) Love & Emotions. ~ Brandy
May Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 8:57 AM
Great write and win WW..Congrats
One Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 6:04 AM
Not very nice memories WW.... Great lines.. Congratulations on first place in the contest...
Wolf Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 10:52 PM
What a metamorphosis! Terrifying and terrific! :) gw
Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 1:05 PM
Man, that sting sure packed a wallop, as did this poem, WW. Well done, w/a little over-the-top on the side. Lol! Just kidding. This was a terrific poem, my multi-talented pen pal. Pure poetry in ink motion. Love and smiles always.
Faulkner Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 3:05 PM
I was born in November, so I'm a Scorpio, so had to read this! Love 'elixir of voodoo' and 'a scorpion sting/a bridal ring' - so stinging!
Gentile Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 2:47 PM
Love the rhyme patterns in this one WW!! Really well done! Best for the contest!!!
Nicole Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 10:07 AM
Ouch!! Watch out for the Scorpion's Sting!! It is sad when love lingers close- and then suddenly it bites, and not in a good way. You have expressed this emotion perfectly. ~ Brandy
Pandit Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 7:00 AM
Excellent, WW. A winning depiction.
Kiser Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 9:38 PM
Beautifully chilling! Sad that relationships have to end sometimes. Well penned.
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