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Scorpions Seminally Sting Jubilant skies once filled my eyes all upon the morning hue Sweet caress gave me happiness upon the embrace of you Sunshine spread with love ahead all amongst heavens view A kiss divine taste like wine as the angels smiled in our debut Moonlit beams in lovers dreams for hearts began their woo Emotions rippled and desires tripled in lusts erupted spew Then clouds of grey were there to stay as love began to skew Our immortal bliss in the black abyss of Hyades special brew Within evil eyes in just disguise I drank your elixir of voodoo A scorpion sting a bridal ring and your poison dripping thru. Sept.26.2018 Lines of ten that remind you what it was like back then Sponsored by: Silent One Placed 1'st [#7]

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Date: 11/3/2018 1:09:00 PM
Lovely wedding vigil well done WW kelli
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Date: 10/11/2018 7:17:00 PM
Congrats on your win, WW. Beautifully done.
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Date: 10/5/2018 7:20:00 PM
Congratulations my Warrior with Wings, on this win!! :) Love & Emotions. ~ Brandy
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Date: 10/5/2018 8:57:00 AM
Great write and win WW..Congrats
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Date: 10/5/2018 6:04:00 AM
Not very nice memories WW.... Great lines.. Congratulations on first place in the contest...
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Date: 10/3/2018 10:52:00 PM
What a metamorphosis! Terrifying and terrific! :) gw
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Date: 10/3/2018 1:05:00 PM
Man, that sting sure packed a wallop, as did this poem, WW. Well done, w/a little over-the-top on the side. Lol! Just kidding. This was a terrific poem, my multi-talented pen pal. Pure poetry in ink motion. Love and smiles always.
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Date: 10/2/2018 3:05:00 PM
I was born in November, so I'm a Scorpio, so had to read this! Love 'elixir of voodoo' and 'a scorpion sting/a bridal ring' - so stinging!
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Date: 9/27/2018 2:47:00 PM
Love the rhyme patterns in this one WW!! Really well done! Best for the contest!!!
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Date: 9/27/2018 10:07:00 AM
Ouch!! Watch out for the Scorpion's Sting!! It is sad when love lingers close- and then suddenly it bites, and not in a good way. You have expressed this emotion perfectly. ~ Brandy
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Date: 9/27/2018 7:00:00 AM
Excellent, WW. A winning depiction.
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Date: 9/26/2018 9:38:00 PM
Beautifully chilling! Sad that relationships have to end sometimes. Well penned.
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