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Scorpionegge

Scorpion sting is more painful than the venom of a snake; headache,cold,fever coupled with peppery feelings. On lifting the old wet brick, It moves swiftly to 'bite me', Scorpionegge sensation flows through my vein to Gwen. Olusegun Arowolo Contest:'Bite Me' by Linda-Marie

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Date: 4/16/2012 12:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Bite Me" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/15/2012 9:13:00 PM
I have never been bitten by an insect as painful as a scorpion...OUCH!! That hurt! ha ah..I might be going into an anaphylactic shock!...hurry get the anti-venom...time is running out!!!! Thanks for playing tag poetry with me and inviting me into the contest, Olusegun..you are way toooo much fun! I do appreciate it! :) Gwendolen oh yeah,,,congrats to you as well! It seems we were ALL WINNERS...even tho we were bit...
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Date: 4/14/2012 9:28:00 PM
Oh this sounds very serious. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/14/2012 9:06:00 PM
ooh, yours is a very scary one!! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/14/2012 8:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!! my friend!!very clever...big hugs,love debs
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Date: 4/14/2012 7:52:00 PM
congrats olusegun on sweet success for this super entry luv.. feeling the bite ..
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Date: 4/9/2012 6:42:00 PM
OUCH!! poor Gwen! Good one Olusegun!! good luck to you in the contest:)
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Date: 4/8/2012 7:10:00 AM
thankxx lusegun for supporting this fun contest luv.. now lets see if Gwen takes the "bite" and enters.. u must notify her .. I am go8ing to do a new blog today with an updated list.. good luck luv.. Happy Easter too..
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