Scorn

HAD FUN WITH ENTERING THE DICTIONARY FUN CONTEST sponsored by Delliah Ventura!
THESE ARE THE WORDS THAT HAD TO BE IN THE POEM 

Abomination scorn Affection Passion Yearning
Struggle Attempt Cherish Relationship Flame
Taste Tender Inner soul Bloom Bamboozle

HERE IS MY ON THE SPOT CREATION!..enjoy :)
I was a woman scorn 
Unknowingly  cherished a relationship
where the flame was no longer existent;
where time flew by in the distance and I missed
everything in my life I intended 
because I was accepting a me that depended
on him
I made an attempt to bamboozle the truth
and convince myself that he wasn’t screwing Kim
Ultimately I faked passion and lustfully feigned for affection
since I’d been betrayed
So, I got down on my knees and  I prayed 
I began yearning for knowledge of my Inner soul
I began to taste freedom and feel whole
The healing began and my consciousness rose - fresh bloom
It was no longer a struggle to end an abomination that would 
prove to be a path of doom
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Roberts Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 11:12 AM
Congrats humble b
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 5:12 AM
Congratulations on your winning place Humble xx
Tsiluma Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 12:54 AM
WHoa! Nicely done! Spot on, I say! I love how you've brought out the woes of relationships and the veil we sometimes put over our eyes even when the truth is screaming at us. Well done!
A   Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 1:36 PM
Humble, nice avatar... love the "Dictionary fun" here.... Congratulations (-: always~&~forever :-) PD
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