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heated summer day scorching sun fries eggs on car leaves me in a sweat

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Date: 1/18/2024 11:27:00 AM
Karen, your haiku vividly captures the intensity of a heated summer day. The imagery of the sun frying eggs on a car roof adds a playful touch to the scene. It's a brief yet powerful snapshot of the sweltering heat, leaving us feeling the warmth and the sweat of the moment. - Wonderful Haiku! - Blessings, Daniel
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Karen Croft
Date: 1/18/2024 2:44:00 PM
Thank you!

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