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Scoffing Derision

When the wars of all nations fall quiet upon shells and shallow graves A mockingbird rises from ashes and spreads its wings into nuclear skies No muezzin left to spread angelic messages but a nest in calm turrets 06th January 2020

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Date: 1/14/2020 6:13:00 PM
what a powerful three lines this is, Kai, Congrats on the win
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Date: 1/14/2020 2:07:00 PM
- Congratulations so much on your winning poem :) - // Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/13/2020 11:55:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, poetically expressing your wise observation. God bless you.
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Date: 1/13/2020 10:06:00 AM
Congrats, a well deserved win. May it resonate today.
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Date: 1/13/2020 1:40:00 AM
So timely, Kai. May it never be so. Congrats ~ John
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Date: 1/12/2020 1:10:00 PM
Profound imagery, Kai. Congrats on your win in the contest. Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 1/12/2020 12:21:00 PM
Your words are so profound and hope it never is seen. Congratulations on your Awesome win in Silent One’s “Threesome”. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/12/2020 10:49:00 AM
Amazing combination of words..Fantastic victory..Congrats..
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Date: 1/12/2020 9:22:00 AM
Wow Kai, I missed this one, congrats on a top win!
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Date: 1/12/2020 7:16:00 AM
The message in this is so powerful and you expressed it so brilliantly.. only three lines, but you said so much and great use of words to create vivid imagery... the last line is just fab... brilliant. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 1/7/2020 5:04:00 AM
Powerful image and message and so very true. All we can do is pray we never see the day ... good write :) hugs
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