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Schooldays Over

The auld fella’s auld fella left the tech after Ripening for sixteen summers. Camden-Wagon-Gravity landed a shovel and a pick at his lonely boots. ‘DIG’. he knew that Language. and by God did he dig. there is a dignity in breaking your back To Stuff A Ganger’s Pockets, And His Belly With Rich Porter. That aching rhythm of pick and shovel Made certain - he would never reach his height. sure look at him now, all stooped and bended A Tunneller’s Posture. There Is A Man! Breaking New Ground, Smashing Sediment and Poverty. With every drive, slam and crack You made Certain we would never go back. Thanks to underground suffering and penance and pain. Schoolday’s are over. You’ve broken the Chain.

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Date: 3/27/2024 7:43:00 AM
Hi Patrick, great poem , beautiful imagery and gritty , I liked the tunneller's posture and breaking sedimentary and poverty . Really enjoyed , excellent stuff. Enjoy the experience . Daniel
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Patrick Silke
Date: 3/27/2024 7:56:00 AM
Thanks a million Daniel. Means a lot.
Date: 3/12/2024 4:32:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/10/2024 5:59:00 AM
Well put, some literally break their backs to help the next generation walk with pride.
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Patrick Silke
Date: 3/12/2024 9:11:00 AM
Thanks very much

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