School Day Questionku

Smiling, the house
opens to the sun
Are you ready for school

Groaning, the bed
covers up his ears
D'you think you can fool me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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January 5, 2016 at 12:33 AM
lol..funny
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March 1, 2014 at 12:29 PM
I like this, I will goread the next one.Lucilla
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December 20, 2013 at 9:13 AM
This is so delightful Hanitra. It makes my day that you like my form. You are so good at it.
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December 20, 2013 at 9:41 AM
I would disagree my dear.
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December 20, 2013 at 9:36 AM
Mmm... Not as good as THE Master of Words, dear Rick! Not as googd as THE Master! (^_^)
Tidd Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 1:54 PM
I have a similar poem, about waking my boys and getting them to school, called "Morning" It is one of my few free-form poems.
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