School Day Questionku

Smiling, the house opens to the sun Are you ready for school Groaning, the bed covers up his ears D'you think you can fool me

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Skat A

Date: 1/5/2016 12:33:00 AM

lol..funny

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 3/1/2014 12:29:00 PM

I like this, I will goread the next one.Lucilla

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/20/2013 9:13:00 AM

This is so delightful Hanitra. It makes my day that you like my form. You are so good at it.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/20/2013 9:41:00 AM

I would disagree my dear.

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 12/20/2013 9:36:00 AM

Mmm... Not as good as THE Master of Words, dear Rick! Not as googd as THE Master! (^_^)

Jim Tidd

Date: 12/11/2013 1:54:00 PM

I have a similar poem, about waking my boys and getting them to school, called "Morning" It is one of my few free-form poems.