Gert W. Knop Poet Tanka

Schneefall -Snowfall -La Nevada , Kintaishi Or Kanshi

Schneefall / Snowfall / La Nevada  (Kintaishi or Kanshi)

Der Schnee fällt wieder
Wo die Natur friert
Dort kehrt Ruhe ein 
Wildenten rufen



The snow falls again
Where the nature freeze
There lodges peace 
The call of wild ducks


Otra vez cae nieve
Donde la naturaleza congela
Allí aloja la paz 
Llamada de patos salvajes


Note: Kintaishi or Kanshi is  a Chinese form of poetry an can be written in different not
rhyming  lines and syllables e.g.  4  lines with 5,6 or 7 syllables in each line
                                      8  lines with 5 0r 7 syllables in each line
			  12 lines with 5 or 7 syllables in each line

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Audrey Haick January 9, 2011 at 1:04 PM I have to try this, Gert! It looks like it is simple enough, but I doubt it! Later this evening, I'll give it a try and will let you know to check it out when you have some time. Take care. Love, Audrey

Sara Kendrick January 8, 2011 at 9:14 AM Enjoyed this one again for it reminded me of the Canadian Geese...Good educational information...I am glad that I stopped by this one this afternoon...We have not had snow here yet; well it did come a few flakes..Predications of snow, ice, or wintry mix for weekend...Sara

Daver Austin January 8, 2011 at 8:03 AM Great woodland scene. Love, Dave

Carolyn Devonshire January 7, 2011 at 1:26 PM This is a new form to me, Gert, and I love the image of winter you have painted. I've been traveling and also sick, but am home now. Soup will shut down at 7 p.m. my time, so I want to be sure to tell you how much your friendship meant to me throughout 2010 and how I hope it continues through 2011. Love and blessings, Carolyn

Wilma Neels January 7, 2011 at 11:47 AM Gert, this has a serene feel to it.. Love it, hope you are keeping warm :) enjoy the weekend ahead

Constance La France January 7, 2011 at 9:28 AM I attempted one, Gert, not sure if I did it right, but it was amazing to write, I did the 12 line version~~

Doris Culverhouse January 7, 2011 at 9:21 AM Kanshi sounds interesting....I will have to try!! Thanks for your comments on my attempts at poetry. Hope you are warm and cozy. Have anything good cooking? I have a beef roast in the crock with red peppers onion, carrots, and potatoes. smells good too.

Constance La France January 7, 2011 at 8:36 AM I just love this Tanka, and I like how you did it in three languages, I am not familiar with this form of poetry Kintaishi or Kanshi but I would like to give it a try for sure~~

Andrea Dietrich January 6, 2011 at 10:48 PM A very tranquil peaceful scene you created. Hi, there. Haven't seen you in a while! Luv, andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 6, 2011 at 4:51 PM Oh Gert u have mesmerized me once again with your lovely lines my friend... could visualize the snow so well and the call of the wild ducks sound too... impressive as always ..with luv..

Hathor Ammutlinra January 6, 2011 at 8:01 AM I love the talent (Lin~Ra)

Poet Destroyer A January 6, 2011 at 7:21 AM a very good visual on the snowfall, the call of wild ducks, good write and enjoyed,..p.d.