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Scentsational Spring

Plentiful the scents
Flowers of bright colors bloom
Upon trees, by river bends
In fields and meadows.
Fiddle of the bees
Silent dance of butterflies
Upon the songs of swallows
In concert style.

Nature rejoices
Because true love is in the air 
Breathe in as its wings deploy
And find peace so fair. 

By CarolineCécile
Copyright © 04.23.11

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Matthew Anish

May 7, 2011 at 8:16 AM

Dear Caroline Liked the rfreshing taste of spring in this one but feel you should re work the last two lines. What country do you live in now? I have never been to Europe but hope to get there one of these days. Thanks so much for your comments on "The Last Jew on Earth". The other day I saw a Holocaust survivor speak and it messed me up for about a week! Continue with your writing and best of health to you and your. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

The Fringe

April 29, 2011 at 9:38 PM

Nice visuals and descriptions. You captured this nicely.

Andrea Dietrich

April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM

what a creative title for a very creative little spring poem!!

James Foulk

April 23, 2011 at 6:08 PM

really loved this beautiful write, so relaxing to read nature poems. there was some great lines in this one the 5th line Fiddle of the bees, the 6th line Silent dance of butterflies and it goes on and on. a very well written piece. thank you for commenting on Quite Little Child.

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