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Scent of Romance

The scent of romance
                                              Electrifies each fiber
                                                  Sheer delirium!

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Debbie Guzzi

May 10, 2013 at 6:07 PM

no title [use line 1 or a number like haiku #2] no capital letters except for Proper nouns ..and on this verse since the scent of romance it's not a good haiku line, you could put [the scent of ripe melon/rises from between the sheets -- the springs creak] see the difference? Light & Love [sensory...]