Scent of Rain

The rain, at last, has finally tiptoed in I almost missed the laughter, but for leaves that murmured quick surprise along the eaves It caught my eye, with tapping on the glass as I looked out to see a somber cast bringing change to evening's sky Then, having heard, I left my cozy place and stepped outside to drink the fragrant air And felt the slope of rain upon my face I heard the dance of dripping leaves against the fray of windswept trees And watched the rope of silver coils in casement light, as evening fell Puddles in the nearby street were playgrounds, dancing to a beat Each slanted chain from heaven fell with balmy incense, in the night Then quickly over, like a dream rain scampered east, without a glance and without a chance to wipe its feet Away it flew in fickle flight So brief it came, to quickly cover the leaves, the grass, and even me with showers, sweet, before my sleep But, left the scent, of sweetened clover
......................................................... 11/13/13 Contest: Rain Sponsored by Eve Roper
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Chansarkar Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 10:45 AM
Nothing can beat the scents of nature!Lovely poem Carrie!
Murray Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 4:08 AM
This is just so beautiful Carrie. It's true that rain can bring forth wonderful scents from mother earth.
Nusker Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 11:21 PM
Beautifully written. Congrats on your win, Carrie. :~))
Haight Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 9:47 PM
Lovely imagery, Carrie. Congrats on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Hamilton Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 7:16 PM
Top quality writing Carrie, worthy of the win!
Arnone Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 7:08 PM
Beautiful wording -- it's free verse, but sounds like rhyme. Poe-like rhythm. One of my favs. Congrats! :-)
Roper Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 5:19 PM
Congratulations on your win, Carrie, :)" finally tiptoed in" caught my eye ! Hug Eve
May Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 5:02 PM
Carrie this was a joy to read...Congrats on your win
Scars Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 4:45 PM
Carrie, a beautiful poem lady :) congrats on your top placement in the Rain contest! :)-luloo
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November 25, 2013 at 9:18 PM
Congrats, Carrie! Your poem is a first place on my list...a fave!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Kendrick Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 4:04 PM
Delightful winning work.Great poetic quality..Congrats on your win..Sara
Hamilton Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 8:08 AM
very poignantly penned Carrie congrats on fine win Shadow x smile hug
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November 19, 2013 at 9:36 PM
Carrie, , Congratulations on your beautiful FRAGRANCE OF RAIN poem... Hugs ~LINDA~
Dietrich Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 8:30 PM
I think this is my favorite of them all. just wonderful, Carrie. congrats.
Mehta Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 8:57 AM
Congratulations on the win, Carrie
Adams Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 7:11 PM
this piece is exquisite Carrie....love the way you penned this one...a winner for sure :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 6:48 PM
Nette will swoon. this is so gorgeous. I see you put your name for her. GOOD.
Onclaud Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 7:22 PM
thank you , carrie.. am i missing inclusion of your name?..:) huggs
Rhinem Avatar
November 15, 2013 at 9:04 PM
† You Are Here And Warm, But I Could Look Away And You'd Be Gone - Cuz We Live In A Time, Where Meaning Falls And Sputters From Our Lifes - Yes, And All Of Things That You Said That You Wanted, Come Rushing By With A Horse And A Carriege - Fourteen Joys And Will To Be Merry ˜ Sentimental Whippoorwill, Blowing Through My Mind And Still, Sentimental Journey Your The One *:* Sweet Kisses Beautiful Carrie Richards, Always, John ... Ps., I Love Your Poetry, Forever Have And, Happy Holidays (*
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