Barbara Gorelick Poet Haiku

Scent of Fir

scent of fir on breeze..
quiet rustle in bushes
rabbit blends with snow

snap of broken branch
snow drifts down to forest floor...
sleeping bear stretches


For Charles' haiku contest

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James Fraser November 21, 2011 at 12:13 PM A delightful scene pictured through your fine words Barbara. Good luck in the contest :)

Sara Kendrick November 20, 2011 at 2:10 PM Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Good luck in the contest..The descriptiveness is very alluring reminds me of Christmases of past when hunting for a tree and having one in the house..Sara

Jack Horne November 20, 2011 at 11:13 AM Very clever haiku, Barbara - I could almost smell the beautiful fir. Many congrats on your wins too, my friend : )

Margaret Foster November 20, 2011 at 1:02 AM I like this one Barbara, It shows me a peaceful winter scene. looking good...Margaret

Andrea Dietrich November 19, 2011 at 7:57 PM Barbara, I really like these and I think you followed his rules REALLY well! Good luck in the contest. LUv, Andrea