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Scent of Fir

scent of fir on breeze.. quiet rustle in bushes rabbit blends with snow snap of broken branch snow drifts down to forest floor... sleeping bear stretches For Charles' haiku contest

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James Fraser

Date: 11/21/2011 12:13:00 PM

A delightful scene pictured through your fine words Barbara. Good luck in the contest :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/20/2011 2:10:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Good luck in the contest..The descriptiveness is very alluring reminds me of Christmases of past when hunting for a tree and having one in the house..Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 11/20/2011 11:13:00 AM

Very clever haiku, Barbara - I could almost smell the beautiful fir. Many congrats on your wins too, my friend : )

Margaret Foster

Date: 11/20/2011 1:02:00 AM

I like this one Barbara, It shows me a peaceful winter scene. looking good...Margaret

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/19/2011 7:57:00 PM

Barbara, I really like these and I think you followed his rules REALLY well! Good luck in the contest. LUv, Andrea